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![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT THE FUUUUDGE! How could you kill human Sasuke :( i was hoping for him to end up with Naruto and vampire Sasuke to be turned to stone or something so he could finally be in peace. I was not expecting that ending at all. I still like this story...but i’m disappointed with the end. Also, it felt a little rushed? The end I mean. Oh my god my heart hurts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So this story is about a full circle story, Right? First, there were this sasuke and naruto. the naruto was died, but sasuke was not and saved by Kakashi, so he became a vampire. And then, the other era, there were also naruto and sasuke. but the Sasuke from the other was still alive. so is made 2 sasukes and 1 naruto existed in that era. the vampire one killed the sasuke in that era, so the nauto would be his. But the naruto was dead again. and came again with a new era. there were also a naruto and sasuke and the story repeated until it come to the 2005 era. this time it's like a beginning. but now there are the vampire sasuke and vampire naruto. And now,sasuke'll turned to vampire by Kakashi again. In the future, will there be 2 vampire sasuke and 1 vampire naruto? A full circle story? Is it correct? or Am I insane? And the one that missing for the vampire sasuke is the reincarnation of himself? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This, this story right here is so intriguing! Never read one like it before dude. I'm hoping the rest of it is just as interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh ho ho... This first chapter should have Romance and Humor tags, it's too funny for such a dark fiction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Didn't even freekin read the first chapter and all I got to say is WTF just from the prologue it seems you want some dumb ass gay vampire shit set in Naruto Universe |
![]() ![]() *shows up ten years late with starbucks* loved this fic! thank you for ruining my life! dear god i hope theres a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont get this story please someone explain it to me |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason, I read “what, you gonna turn into a BOAT or something?” Instead of “bat,” and I was sorely confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE the store clerk’s name. When I saw it I thought of the novel but didn’t thing further on it. So when Sasuke was having his internal dilemma I realized the connection and reference. It was such a perfectly subtle foreshadowing that I had to pause and marvel at it. Good job! |
![]() ![]() Oh my god. oH MY GOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck. This is a magnificent story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Truly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like I’ve been holding a breath and I finally released it. I cried for what felt like an hour over this fanfic. I hate Sasukeh and I hate naruto and I very lightly hate this story... because I love it. The pain I feel I can’t describe it. Through the whole story i just wanted sasuke to get his last kiss, the kiss that they needed when he left to Japan. I wanted them to have a happy ending and I knew what was coming the moment both sasuke’s fought yet I still expected sasuke and naruto to end up together. This reminds me of another vampire fic that I recently read that had different time periods and sasukes. Sasukeh here just made me hate him so much, for forcing, and for getting naruto to remember. I hated the chapters learning about him because I felt like he was just jealous. His naruto was the first one that died when he was human, his need to find a new naruto and steal him from his sasuke just felt so selfish and wrong. I really wish this ended differently but thank you for writing something so heartbreaking and interesting. |
![]() ![]() I wish you would of posted your unedited stories on AO3 but oh well, love your stories either way. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still one of my fave fanfics! |