|Reviews for Perfect World|
| LovingYouAtFirstSight chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
that was a great story. I am quite fond of Lily and her view of the boys. It is amusing. My favourite line however was:
"You get the surname. Isn't that enough for you?"
Very Sirius. Well done.
| Free Dreamer Night Writer chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
A perfect world, a dream desired but so far away.
Really beautiful. I loved it.
| psycho-pink-faerie chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
I really enjoyed this. Your portrayal of Lily was excellent and I love how you captured Sirius' arrogance :) I don't often read Marauders fics but this really was lovely. Well done :)
| kiwiandtheattackoftheplotbunny chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I like it and it was funny in some parts.
| asterdarling chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
What an excellent story. It has a perfect balance of unease and happiness, all wrapped in one. It's like she knows that she's missing out on scarce moments to feel at peace in a world full of such struggle.
This is beautifully written. Excellent work, really.
| she'sasiriusriot chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
awww poor lily! it would be heart breaking to watch them all going and knowing they might no come back. but at least lily gets her wish for harry
| xabandonedaccountx chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Very lovely. I liked the calm perfect world of the snowglobe being represented in the real world, sort of a calm before the storm. I also really liked Sirius going on about the names.
| DoubleCaramel chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
*stares* I love this one Katy. I should read your stories more often, you're a brilliant writer. This little piece is lovely and has a cosy and domestic feel to it, I can feel the Christmas/winter essence of it even if it's boiling hot outside. The characters are perfect and ring very true to themselves (or how they would be at that age). I love Sirius's banter, in fact I love it made me happy and hopeful (I will ignore the less happy ending we all know about).
| mrsremusjohnlupin chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
This was wonderful!
(: Did not feel like
homework at all,
reading this cute piece.
[: I think that you
should write a follow-up
story, where Harry is
watching his kids
play in the snow. (:
Just a thought.
| iMissHP chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
It's a bitter-sweet fic, I love it. It's angsty yet sweet and cute, I think you managed the balance between the two very well. Great job!
| Love From A Muggle chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
I loved this. You have wonderful description. I pictured Lily and her pregnancy and pictured the snow. Great job with this one.
| Louey06 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Sirius Remus Peter Potter. it;s catchy. If you say Peter Potter really fast it's really funny. Like a tongue twister. Anyway, Very good story i think it's a nice little story about the marauders and Lily enjoying peace.
| RavenEcho chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
I like it, especially the bit about names.
| sleepy queens chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Yeah, Peter's preoccupied, the little rat. Anyway, so cute. I could completely imagine the Marauders having snowball fights, even as adults. In fact, if they all survived, I bet they would even do it as they get even older. You know, play with their grandchildren :)
| seriesreader chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
it made me smile happily and sadly (for some parts)...but beautiful all the same...:)