Reviews for Demolished Barriers
romeosjuliet14 chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
that was but had some grammar and spelling errors, but it was awesome.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 2 . 3/3/2010
Still very sexy and very erotic
Scary.Jibberish chapter 2 . 10/12/2009
YES WRITE MORE! XD
MynameisJudeLouise chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
What. the. fuck.

No pun intended.

That was slightly fucked up.

kools~*
sheviking chapter 2 . 9/17/2009
Loved it! You're a great writer!
Suzy Q Something chapter 2 . 7/24/2009
wow, that was dreamy
Magemaster chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
Oh i deffinnetly want more! This is great.
Lemon Verbena chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
More please :)
angeldevil33 chapter 2 . 9/18/2008
OME! that was so hot! *fans self* loved it! both of them! that would be so cool if you could make more for this. i dont have any idea how, but isnt that the point? lol

muchos kudos for joo!
mspacman1 chapter 2 . 9/10/2008
Great job at making it a good "sex" story without losing their relationship. I think you should continue!
dragonprincess3 chapter 2 . 9/9/2008
TWO SHOT! TWO SHOT! hehehehe!
edandbellsfurever chapter 2 . 9/8/2008
luv it! please make it into a story!
V-G chapter 2 . 9/7/2008
AWESOME! Lol, :D this was good. Still can't get over Edward swearing lol, unless he does in Breaking Dawn (need to wait for paperback) but yeah, awesome, loved it :D
april black-cullen chapter 2 . 9/7/2008
The first part of the story in Bella's POV was really good. It was actually very steamy. A few grammatical errors (Brung is not a word.. .the past for Bring is Brought).

The second part in Edward's POV seemed like it was just Bella's point of view with Edward narrating. I don't think you quite had Edward's voice down.
Jaguarsolaris chapter 2 . 9/6/2008
wow! more please!
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