|Reviews for Love is watching someone die|
| Romancebuffgian chapter 3 . 11/28/2008
it was better thn good , even though i noe in the end bella will die i want to read anyway so u can probably guess by tht, tht it was good. keep up the good work.
| lorit chapter 3 . 11/25/2008
Great story! I just came across it, and hope for more some day!
| jenniblu421 chapter 3 . 11/23/2008
Okay, it is killing me that this is the most recent chapter. I really like what you are doing with this story and the concept is very original. I hope that you decide to continue with the story! Great work, amazing chapter and fabulous story!
| jenniblu421 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
| sophiafoots chapter 3 . 11/16/2008
Wow, I hope you continue this story. I love the idea of it despite it being so sad. I don't want them to be separated :( This is going to be such a tearjerker!
| ell6ange chapter 3 . 11/13/2008
this is a fantastic story i hope you will be continuing it sson..
| Bufster chapter 3 . 11/8/2008
it so sad yet so sweet at the same time
cant wait to read more D
| americnxidiot chapter 3 . 11/8/2008
this is just so... tragic
like reading Romeo and Juliet. The prologue, or sonnet I guess, tells you they die, but you really want to believe it will go otherwise.
This will be hard to finish reading.
| Britt01 chapter 3 . 10/28/2008
Very good :) I like that they "both grew a set of balls" and worked things out LOL. And quite successfully too! Man, this is a bittersweet story. And they have a kid...Edward better not think of offing himself this time...
| Britt01 chapter 2 . 10/28/2008
Well, using Mike certainly got the response she was looking for! But I'm very glad that the gang all followed to break up the "party". Gotta love a protective Edward.
| Britt01 chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
I love how they've all met ("She speaks in exclamation points!" LOL), and Bella being so forward, but this is gonna get painful real quick, isn't it? At least you've made that obvious from the beginning, so it won't be a huge surprise.
| TakeOut chapter 3 . 10/26/2008
A sad but extremely good story. Can't wait to read more. x
| Melolabel chapter 3 . 10/23/2008
Sweet. Sad that Bella's dying, will we find out what the disease is that she has?
| edwardbellaforever chapter 3 . 10/22/2008
| Kricketts chapter 3 . 10/19/2008
I have read the first two of your stories, I found out about them from the twilight group on cafemom, I just want to say that you are an awesome writer, and I am not sure if you already are or have tried to pursure your own professional writing career, but I think you would be great! I would def read your books :) I am trying to finish writing my first story, and it really helps to read great writing when I am at a stand still, you rock girl keep up the good work!