Reviews for Love is watching someone die
babyxbxgurl chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
*jumps up and down* Yay! Another story from the Queen! LoL Omg, this is crazy! I was about to cry in the beginning! All the pain that Edward felt, like I could feel it also! I feel so bad, he's so hurt.. Poor Edward, you are too good on making emo Edward! hehehe! Anyways, the way they met was cute! That sucks Bella's dad wasn't there, but it's okay, she has Edward! Eww, Mike! Edward needs to beat him up or something! It was so cute when Edward was jealous.

The little Eddie part just killed me! It just had to be Emmett and Rose who catches them! I can't want till you update! This is an amazing first chapter! :D
u2ugly2nv chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I LOVE IT! the beginning was sad... but reading how they met was sweet...

can't wait for the new update...
edwardandbellabelong2gether chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
LOVE this story already! Can't wait for MORE!
barbarito chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Oh My Gawd GOO! Already this story is sucking me in! I am so depressed that Bella is dying! GAH! Say it isnt so! LOVE the flashback and of them meeting! So excited to see where you will take this!
brittybee93 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Love the flashback! Edward is perfect. But I do have a bad feeling about the end of this story? Maybe?
twilight-is-lovee chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
AWE! I love it!

Why is Bella dying?


Or is that something you can't tell me just yet?

And btw, when are you putting up the epilogue thing for your story 'Realize'?
Debussy-This chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Goo BB,

You are going to KILL me with this one. I barely survived Realize in once piece. It makes me want to love on ya.
Edward's-a-beefcake chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
OK... I will be your first. I like the story... its the perfect meeting for them and I love the forward Bellaness! BUT... does she really have to die! They are supposed to live happily ever after with an accent on the happy part. Tell mr he discovers a cure for her illness or that they made a mistake in her diagnosis. Just DONT let poor Bella die!
ReachingAsIFall chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
aw.. I have a feeling that this story is going be really sad. But it is going to be amazing as well. I am really looking forward to it.

Please update soon!
geekgirlhope chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Oh this is so good already. I love their first meeting and what happened after. I can feel the angst a coming though.
anuddaone chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I already feel like I can't breath...just a few lines into the story...

Only because you wrote...if it were anyone else's story the tears wouldn't be worth it...

Can't wait to
bethaboo chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Goo, you are amazing and I love you and that is the only reason I can even bring myself to read this story that equals heart fail on so many levels. As always, its amazing and I love it already. And I know I'm going to end up crying buckets over it.
WeasleyWeakness chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Aw, I think this is going to take the 'ruin my life' spot.

Three fucking lines into the story my eyes are already watering big time!

I can't wait!
Shoutoutloud91 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Oh my god...

I have a feeling this is gonna be one of those fanfictions that I'm gonna sob like a little baby while I read it...

Oh well - it looks fantastic so far.

I'm sad right now from Bella is going to die... which makes me curious as to exactly WHY (but I guess you'll let us know later on. lol)...

Either way, I'm very interested and you've caught my attention.

Post as soon as possible, this looks like a great story!

- Emily -

PS: I just checked out your profile a second ago and I LOVE your avatar. Yes, I do believe Robert Pattinson approves. :D

Rob for President! :)
starlite1108 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I think that this story is off to a great start. I already feel emotionally invested with your versions of the characters. My only suggestion (take it or leave it, I understand) is that you reverse the time line. As a reader, I am much more likely to review after the angsty parts than I am for the fluffy parts. I like the fluff, but I really like the parts where I am more emotionally invested. Thanks for starting a new fic. Can't wait to read the rest.
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