Reviews for Love is watching someone die
AquarianGirl chapter 4 . 1/1/2009
this is a rly touching story, ive cried a bit a couple of times already. which is a good thing cuz that shows how much emotion is in this story. i love how u start off with the present n go to a flash back. i highly encourage u to continue writing it. im curious to see what happened between them that made the marriage go wrong when everything was so perfect between them. n im hoping for sum kind of miracle for bella to survive altho at this point, under the conditions she's in, im doubting it. very good story. update soon!
jbluvs2sing chapter 4 . 1/1/2009
Welcome back! Loved the chapter. Sad and happy at the same time!
Esmi76 chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
This story is going to put me on bi polar meds, lol

Its really good but ya got me on an emotional roller coaster. now that's not a bad thing, your very effective...
Esmi76 chapter 3 . 12/31/2008
Oh My Edward!

Okay you have a gift girl, I was crying terribly and then it gets all romantic and hott in here...

I like it :)
Esmi76 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
I really like it so far very bitter sweet.
JustForkIt chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
*tears* worth the wait.
MyEdward797 chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
That was so sad. I'm crying my eyes out right now. I don't know if I'll be able to read it when Bella actually does die, that's how broken up I am right now. I'm such a sap. Lol. I can't wait for another update!
KirstyM chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
Aw! That was so cute and amazing!

The first parts always make me wanna cry... and the second parts always make me smile.

I love your story!

xx
NoLongerAnAccount00 chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
I seriously will not be able to handle it when bella dies! Because we are just learning about how cute htey are and then we still know shes dieing...-sigh- im crying and shes not even dead yet! and im kinda hoping some magic cure will fall from the sky...
The Cullen Girl chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
Wow, every chapter I resolve to not get all choked up and yet everytime I do! I love the way that you are telling this story. I'm not sure I can handle when Bella actually dies though. I might have to skip that chapter and rewrite one where she comes across an old orderly in the hospital who smells like cookies and comforts her and then hugs her before he lives. Then Bella falls asleep and when she wakes up she is miraculously healed! She tells her family and her doctor about the orderly and they say that no one works there with that description. Then we learn that he was really an angel in human form he came to let them all live happily ever after because Bella and Edward are too great together to be separated. Yeah, that's the ticket, I'm going with that ending!
ITeachArtnTX chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
I hate where this is going, but I can't stop reading. Beautifully done.
BellaEdwardlover1991 chapter 4 . 12/31/2008
short, but sweet. nice :)
americnxidiot chapter 4 . 12/30/2008
Heartbreaking. Absolutely heartbreaking.
acirelemagne chapter 4 . 12/30/2008
GOO! I was just thinking about you the other day! Wondering if i would get more delicious heartbreak from this story! Good chapter and i am glad you are back to writing!
WaitingToBeDazzled chapter 4 . 12/30/2008
you're killing me! i cried through the whole chapter! first sad tears and then happy tears at the end! thanks for updating!
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