Reviews for White Light
Stephanie O chapter 2 . 12/11/2011
Neat story idea! I never thought of it that way, but I can see why they wouldn't like it when Alice plays outfield! lol :)
Jerrbear907 chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
I love these! I'm looking forward to more. ]
TodaysSorrowTomorrowsRevenge chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
siruisblack18 chapter 2 . 9/24/2008
:) loved this, excited for more!
yahoo-chloe chapter 2 . 9/17/2008
A nice update, well written. Keep up the great work x
AmazingBouncingFerret445 chapter 2 . 9/16/2008

update again please
morrisdee chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
i really, really, really love this.

even though i read part of midnight sun, this was written just a beautifully.

edward was just so in character, and your writing was beautiful.

i think you should continue- and put scenes that was not in midnight sun.


i loveed this!
milkmamma chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
nice job... looking forward to more!
AmazingBouncingFerret445 chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
oh excellent. i cant wait to see what scene you'll write next.

please update soon :)
cruciolicous chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
i love the way you described how edward picks up thoughts in the form of complicated colors and symbols, as opposed to the italic phrases most writers use to mark someone's else's thoughts in edward's head, because ppl most certainly do not always think in coherant sentances.

can't wait for the next update ]. keep it up .
Lemondrop xxx chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
It's great to see you writing again! You lend Edward exactly the voice I expect, and I can't wait to see what you get out next!

LD. x
vikingcheer08 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Absolutely amazing! You really tapped into Edward's character perfectly! Now I really can't wait to read Midnight Sun and see how close you get to Stephenie's Edward!
Masochisim chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
That was amazing!