Reviews for Better than Birthday Cake
creampuffsteph chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
m sexy edward cookin up a steaming bowl of hot lovin (ok, i'm odd). i love that edward was clueless about the guy in bella's journal. sigh
Atlaxxxx chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Okay! I would normally tell people to add more detail or something but this was romance. Not lusty, rough, desire. It was romantic and so the excessive details are not needed. Very good story. Sweet, sensual, and a very lucky birthday girl (lol)
sunshine4047 chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
I think you should continue this. I know it was a one-shot, but i want to know what her present is.
ladhoo93 chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
ok, why in all of ur stories, well almost all of them, do they have to have already had sex befor ethey met? that just ruines it, i'm sorry, especially for me, as i don't believe in sez before marriage at all. and its also very offending when u mention that people like me r prudes.

i'm sorry for the blow up, but i like to put myself out there, you know?

please reply back.
Emma Hardy chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
aah ::squeals:: Okay this one is even better than the HS one. They just get better and better each time you write them! I think I liked this one because it was much more IC than the others. But it is really very intersting to think about what would have happened in the real book if they were human. I mean sure, we wouldn't have a book. But think about it...if all the Cullens were really just siblings and were human, would they still have ended up together? I think I just found a plot for my new story haha. But I should probably finish what I started first...anyway. This review is much too long already ;) Amazing, Katie...amazing.
GroovyExcel chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
**In sing-songy voice** Oh Chef... I'm hungry...
abigail-ann-cullen chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
good concep! i love it
Gwarpy chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
i loved this it was so cute! great one-shot! :)
shanbug07 chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
I really liked this one too!

-Shan
Rachelandthecupcakecrusades chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Aw! So cute!
Prpurpledragon chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
OMG~That was an amazing story. You are gifted my dear. Great job as always. I would not mind such a Birthday
Suzie092290 chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
LOVE THIS! ! ! !
sanctuary-in-dreams chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Ew. School. LOL.

Well, I really liked this idea! It was very sweet and clueless Edward was adorable! The lemon was also very nice- I loved how you made them one only ten minutes away from her birthday. It was all very...romantic.

Great job writing!
Bookgirl265 chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
i like it. how can you keep up with work, school and keep updated everything? i could never do it. keep upi the good writing.
Ginaaaa chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
I really liked this one! Great job.
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