|Reviews for Beginning|
| Tropicallight chapter 1 . 4/14
Amazing! Good job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
Good but it could be cleaned up a bit. It's a little hard to understand whats going on, even though I know what happened.
| overninethousand chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
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| Dandelion Cat chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Wow! You are an excellent writter! This was really descriptive and well detailed. Great job on the story!