|Reviews for Kyle 091|
| HaloEvangelion03 chapter 9 . 9/6/2008
thought that this was OK
but i'm pretty sure Kelly knows what flipping people off is, 'cause she flips off some Sentinals in Ghosts Of Onyx, or as it says 'she showed them an ancient and arcane hand gesture'
| E. Mansten chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
OH SHIT, ORIGINALITY. I've NEVER seen a story where a Halo fan falls into the game somehow. Stop living in your fantasies, or at least redirect it to a original idea.
| Dagger Kitsune chapter 9 . 9/4/2008
I really do like this story. I love how Kyle acts like a real person would if they got stuck in his shoes. I also love how you explain stuff that wasn't in the books.
I laughed when Kyle flipped the bird at the general.
Can't wait for the next update.
| H.S.O. The Gate Man chapter 9 . 9/4/2008
Your developing this really well. As always keep it coming.
| Delphicism chapter 8 . 9/3/2008
*Spoiler Alert*(for the other readers)
I figured that would happen, but nice way of making the inevitable happen. It's sad though Sam was taken down by a mere Grunt instead of a Jackal. That was very ironic to me.
I have no real critisism on this chapter other than the plain pradictablity; however, the excecution of emotions from Kyle and Kelly was near perfect, so bouns points for that.
On another note it is my personal opinion that if Sam was saved it would have taken away from this story's meaning. It would have also brought attention from "Cannon freaks" who complain about tweaking the original storylines. So Bravo on avoiding that. Also on the same note, I would personally like to see Kyle alter Halo's history, but it is up to you what you wish Kyle to accomplish.
I will definatly be tunning in for the next chapter.
| H.S.O. The Gate Man chapter 8 . 9/3/2008
Your writing style keeps improving. Keep it up.
I thought you might do something like this(killing Sam and all) But I have not read the books(yet) so alot of this is new to me.
But It is easy to follow.
| H.S.O. The Gate Man chapter 7 . 9/2/2008
Woot! Another chapter up!
Can't wait to see if Sam lives and how it affects the story line.
Keep up the good work!
| H.S.O. The Gate Man chapter 6 . 9/2/2008
Nothing bad to say at all.
| Delphicism chapter 6 . 9/2/2008
Bravo. I'm very intrested in this story, and I'm excited to find out what happens to Kyle and how he will effect the events of Halo. Two thumbs way way up.
The only critique I have is that there are some things that need to be capitalized and a few mispellings. I figure most are typos or spell check screw ups. Over all though this is a very good, well written story.
| Doctor's T.A.R.D.I.S chapter 6 . 9/1/2008
Oh there catching on. Wonder what's going to happen next.
| Doctor's T.A.R.D.I.S chapter 5 . 8/31/2008
hmm it's interesting how you explain alot of the things they fail to explain in the books. Like the lights failing and the video missing. I can't wait for when the coves get involved or even the rebel base attack(if you do anything with that).
| ray jericho chapter 4 . 8/30/2008
Is there a reason you didn't capitalize John nearly at all. I like your writing style though so keep it up.
| Doctor's T.A.R.D.I.S chapter 4 . 8/30/2008
Yeah! They met. Mabey now we can see some more action. (training and stuff)
| ray jericho chapter 3 . 8/30/2008
This is good. Solid story, and nearly plausible. I'm assuming that later chapters will tie in why he was transported. MAKE MORE!
| Doctor's T.A.R.D.I.S chapter 3 . 8/30/2008
Oh this is getting good! Can't wait to see how the other Spartans reacton to the new recruit or his knowlege of the future.