Reviews for Kyle 091
Zues Killer Productions chapter 8 . 12/30/2014
I actually read a fanfic where the author changed history (Asleep. No, it's not HALO; it's fire emblem).

Short version: it went from bad to a shitfest of bad tidings.
Zues Killer Productions chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Self insirts and HALO?

Considering tv tropes recommended this, I'll bite.
Illuviar chapter 39 . 8/2/2014
AWESOME story!
Illuviar chapter 36 . 8/2/2014
Great chapter!
facepalm chapter 16 . 7/25/2014
ONOOOOOO

BULLET TO THE GUT

AHM DIEING

NUUUUUUU

DURNT LEAV ME

I ALWAYS LUVED U

NUUUUUUUU

*dead
rabblerouser chapter 11 . 7/25/2014
Just... just... such a god awful storyline... almost no character development... atrocious grammar...

I would have enjoyed this more if these flaws were fixed.
GrammarCop chapter 6 . 7/25/2014
I will never get used to the horrendous spelling and grammar of this fic.

It moves along much too fast, and the OC is much too accepting of his role as a Spartan.
nafara chapter 39 . 7/15/2014
oh my god... i really think that is... a awsome! Idea! i would love a sequel! cause i hardly ever find a really awsome fanfic!
Socritarien chapter 39 . 6/10/2014
I couldn't stop reading it. Fantastic job.
Clefspear chapter 39 . 4/16/2014
I Seriously loved your story, now to check out the sequals
Gundam-Knight-Chris chapter 39 . 3/20/2014
Oh my God, that story was so epic.
ILikedabubbles chapter 39 . 2/26/2014
Well damm. Is there a sequel.
ForgottenPrince chapter 39 . 2/20/2014
Absolutely AMAZING story, I love this kind of story and you did it just so right. Amazing simple amazing and a happy ending everyone could love. Amazing story.

Regards Prince
youngjames1 chapter 39 . 1/8/2014
First things first... make a sequel

this story was amazing. it was the best halo fanfic i have read since my last halo crossover (over 1 year ago). this story puts books like the halo sieries, twilight, harry potter, and 99% of all other fanfics to shame. i sieriously hope you continue this with a sequel and i hoped since kelly and kyle first kissed. 5 star rating.

XD
NightWithMoon chapter 8 . 8/20/2013
if you're just going to write the same story...
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