|Reviews for Those who do not belong|
| Yuu3 chapter 11 . 6/7
I just wanted to say, I actually have doubts when I started reading this. The first few chapters are just so, bizarre. It's Allen, but it's not Allen. It's not him anymore, his character is like, completely gone, which would match his now hundred years old life after war but felt so out of character to me. Like this is just a different character holding the name Allen Walker. Then came in OCs for this generation of Black Order. Which makes sense but I'm particular about OCs.
Despite that all, I'm really glad I stayed and continued reading. Things got more and more interesting after Allen, or Kal, turned to Reklaw and stayed in Hogwarts and interacting with others more, showing a little more of what remains he has of Allen Walker. Especially when he named Kanda the bowtruckle. (The interaction and thought about Kanda the bowtruckle is very cute though. Kanda the bowtruckle is very cute. The bowtruckle is so cute! Oh gosh, I love him! Its actions and behavior, aww Kanda the bowtruckle.) When he reminisce on the past, or rather, when it seems like he is, since it's not alway explicitly stated. And we got more people's POV on Reklaw and more stuff going on and everything changes! I love it now!
Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful story! I enjoyed reading it. I hope to see more from you.
| Yuu3 chapter 8 . 6/7
Walker! I did not expect that! I should, I did wonder why such a particular name. But wow! That reveal was so exciting! The painting, the history, ahhh, they were remembered even after a hundred years, my heart-!
Side note, I love Kanda the bowtruckle. Both for its name and its attachment to Allen('s coat).
| PeriperiWinkle chapter 11 . 1/4
I love this so much! I'm torn on whether I want Kal to be revealed to the wizards or for him to stay a mystery and keep trolling Umbridge, but either way you choose I'm sure I will love it! And you've had me at the edge of my seat since 2015 wondering what moves everyone is gonna make!
I've had this favorited since January 2010 so I'm used to the long waits, but still I hope you're doing well. Please don't abandon this, it's always a really fun read whenever I go back to reread it. (I've found myself coming up with headcanons for this fic even lol) And again I love your writing so much and I can't wait for any future updates!
| DesertedDessert chapter 11 . 10/29/2016
Wow , this is way to awesome to be left hiatus ...
So~please update~ I'd be happy to see Umbridge's face when she sees Allen ' s noah form ...*chuckles evilly *
| tewak chapter 11 . 9/9/2016
i havent read this fic in years but i finally decided to reread it and read the ''new'' chapters and i just love it so much! your writing style is great and the way you characterize allen is so good. and i love the snape and kal interaction. im hope you write more sooner or later :))
| thebizarrehairtrio chapter 11 . 5/29/2016
Updateeee~~~ This plot is rather captivating, and I'm trying to think up theories of how the Golden Trio will unravel the mysteries surrounding Kal, and what their reactions would be.
Oh, and I'm with you on the Kal/Severus slash. It's an interesting one XD
| TrashAnon chapter 11 . 5/16/2016
| Hidari chapter 11 . 4/17/2016
Beautifully written! I know there are typos and all those POVs announcements and all... BUT the atmosphere and the chars are all delicious. I confess to not liking the idea of the 3 of exorcists at first but they've grown on me. I do hope you write more.
| MnMsRoK chapter 11 . 3/20/2016
Just curious, are you going to continue this story? It is quite interesting. Thanks!
| Rin1730 chapter 11 . 3/15/2016
I want to read more! Love this story!
| Shattering chapter 6 . 2/27/2016
I like your story, I hope you won't lose your motivation for writing
| Asmodel chapter 11 . 1/17/2016
Lovely to have an update !
And I can't wait to see more Snape / Allen interactions *grins*
| jy24 chapter 11 . 1/16/2016
This fanfic is really an interesting one to read, hope that you would continue this in the future.
| kyothefallenkit chapter 11 . 12/9/2015
I'm so happy to see your return to this story xD it's so would earful and fun to read x3 I can't wait to read more someday xDDD
| Amelia Loves Anime chapter 11 . 11/28/2015
I really, really, like this story. It has it's own flavor, if that makes sense, that is simply amazing. I love how you wrote it and it's interesting seeing what you think the order would be like if it stuck around. Thank you for writing this!