Reviews for A Lack of Color
Rosebug chapter 1 . 10h
That was...beautiful. There’s really no other way to say it. I love it, everything about it. I love how Stan and Kyle talk to each other: light and witty, but still so deep. I love the feeling of the piece: the bittersweet melancholy and the visceral realness. I love the style and the word-choice and the idea that Stan and Kyle are soulmates (platonic or otherwise), that without each other they would be lost. So, yes, it was beautiful, and I loved it all, and I know you’ll probably never read this review (given that your profile hasn’t been updated since 2013 and your last story is seven years old), but I just wanted to say thank you for writing this.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16
This is absolutely AMAZING, so heartfelt and beautiful
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7
Hi, thank you for writing this. I'm pretty sure this saved my life in some way or another. I've been struggling with a few things in life, and knowing that others feel the same way (even fictional characters) is reassuring. Thank you.
Forestpool chapter 1 . 11/24/2017
Wow... Just... Wow
flowerprincesss chapter 1 . 5/15/2017
This was so beautiful! Really liked how you developed their relationship in a matter of one day, it was natural and the way you described Stan's feelings felt so personal and intimate. Thank you for taking your time to write this! I really loved it 3
herbione chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
This is perfect, I love this is not a exctly romance. You deserve fav!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
This was great! I love how the Emptiness is the fact that Kyle isn't there with Stan. And I agree with you, Stan and Kyle are soul mates, whether they know it or not.
Becca chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
This story not only restores my faith in humanity but also that true love exists. Thank you!
anon420 chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
This is beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. I think there are a lot of people out there who experience a similar emptiness; like something's missing, and that one thing would be enough to make them feel whole. The line about Stan feeling disconnected really stood out to me. I feel very far away from people, like there's a wall of glass between me and everyone else. We can see each other, but it's like they're not really there with me. Maybe it's just because I can only see them from my perspective, and vise versa. I feel like everyone is a piece of this puzzle, but even if we come together, we're still different pieces, with different shapes; like a fraction of my own self. There's a part of me that likes this, and a part of me that wishes there were no spaces between the pieces; that I could experience myself as the whole puzzle. I'm ranting, though, and possibly only making sense to myself. At the very least, I've always wondered what it would be like if I were to meet someone who made me feel less alone. A puzzle piece that connected with mine in such a way that the space between us wouldn't matter. But I find it hard to believe that I could find that in another human being. It's what I've always wanted, though. So this fanfic really hit home with me. I dig this line about the sun: "It was too bright and cheerful and it fooled people into thinking the day was going to be a good one."
ally-kat312 chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Wow. That was really something. I think you captured all the two characters nicely and it was not typical at all. In the good way that is. Something new and interesting is what makes fanfiction worth reading, right? Good job :)
xXStyle4lyfeXx chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
I don't usually review because I'm the kind of person to deprive people of what they want and think it's funny. But that's beside the point, this story is amazing and you are obviously talented. Instead of thanking me for the rare review, allow me to thank you for this touching story ;# . Kind FYI , suicide is a matter that i have had to deal with in myself and others
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
This is amazing. Kyle's note had me crying at the end. And the last two sentences were so perfect.
yanera chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
I'm crying...omg that was so beautiful! I LOVED how you changed it up; this is the first fiction I've read that introduced the both as strangers. Anyways I also loved Kyle's personality in this; a little bubbly and clueless. You are amazing and i really wished you made this longer. It was such a pleasure to read.
cori chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
perfect. thank you. :)
Naphtali's Ink chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
This is one of the best SP one shots I've ever read. Very few fics on here actually make you think, and since I've been really struggling with depression lately this actually helped lift my spirits a bit. Thanks for the awesome read.
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