|Reviews for Hero Soup|
| CrazyLittleGermanMiss chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
I really enjoyed it.
Riley is MY hero!
but it's true...
| Kinokiita-tenshi chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
excellently written. i like it. you gave good detail and made your points clear. awesome.:)
| Aimme chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Awesome! I love the ending! :D I love it! Fantasic story!
'Course, I'd love to read the two of them having a heart-to-heart talk, learning these sorts of details about each other... ;)
I look forward to reading more of your stuff. *goes off to do so*
| save changes to normal chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Wow. I love how you were able to knit all this deep stuff together about their friendship and how real it is while these two were on totally different pages! It seems like such a guy thing to me. The fact that Ben never got to say a word worked well here. And Riley *would* insist on making Chicken and Stars for his poor, voice-deprived, sick friend. Darn those elves. Lol.
But it's always amazing how well you think through the backstories for your characters. With this story, even though it's a oneshot, you get so much insight into these two and what makes them tick and what it's like to be a part of their world. And it totally feeds into what motivates them in all the other stories you write. Holy moly, woman! Great job as per usual.
Also, may I say, perfect ending. :D grins. And...I'm out of space now. When did they put a character limit on reviews? Hmph
| Memories Left Abandoned chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
that was amazing and adorable. D
| ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
A great story. Very good.
| ddamato chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Oh man, I would love to read more about those scars. You should write a one shot about that. ;
| RoxasIsReal13 chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
YAY! MORE FLUFF!
| KCS chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
That was truly a perfect oneshot. Awesome stuff!
| Sammykinz chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
That was so cute. X3 Seriously, that's about all I can say. A bit of angst for good measure, but I'm really amazed at how you portray everybody's thoughts and feelings in all your stories. Great job.
| puretorture27 chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
I think that was one of the best one-shots I've ever read. And it's definately the first one I've read that i actuallty read the ending and thought "that was throughly satisfying. It dosn't leave you hanging drooling for more." I hate one-shots that act like novels. Thank you for letting people like me enjoy your writing!
| Jaeh chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
"My Hero". once Riley reads that, I could envision him saying (well, he doesn't know what its about, anyway).. "Ben, I just grabbed a bowl of soup for you. no need to get all mushy on me." and Ben would just smile, leaving Riley flustered, thinking that it's prolly just Ben daydreaming/thinking again. :p
anyway, aw Ben. Look, your hero is usually the most overlooked person there is, and in your case, Riley. He's strong, smart, loyal, and all that awesome good stuff. One wonders why girls don't see him like that!
Nice touches about star wars, and indy jones(my fav too, hehehe) and windows is not all that bad, riley! well, except for all those bugs...
and thanks for the dedication... _ i'd self-promote that story in my review, but that would be just too weird... :D so, yeah... ;)
| Spice of Life chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
I LOVED IT. I've really missed your writing, especially the christmas story! Keep 'em coming.
| Thuraya Known chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
wow! so good! loved this: "It wasn’t that Ben was deliberately ignoring his friend, it was just that Riley had seemed fine without him at the moment and there were a million other things that were demanding his attention." reasoning on ben's attitude in between the first and second movie. original! shows that he doesn't have to be a jerk!
i also like the alphabet soup part. that memory seems so warm, yet cold when you think about the other aspects of this story. are you going to continue this? id like to find out more about this stuff!
| JCRobin chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
The story is very nice. You have a lovely way with words. I like the relationship and the introduction of the hero idea early off. I like Riley's past as it seems to be based off of fact in the movie (Ie: attachment issues as you mentioned to me). The introspective fics are always the most interesting and always the most thought out. Good job!