|Reviews for FORGOTTEN MEMORIES|
| theliznach chapter 7 . 2/2/2009
I'm just loving this more and more. It's just such an original and well written story, and I agree with the previous reviewer, you should post this in other place too, because more people should be reading this.
I look forward to the next chapter!
| Paija chapter 6 . 1/28/2009
This is such a good story. Sweet and sad at the same time. Hopefully Darcy will remember something when they meet. It would be very cruel if he dismissed Elizabeth as only tolerable...
I would suggest that you put this story on some more boards, like AHA, for example, because it is not easily found as it is. Maybe you could put notice of it in JAFF index?
Then I also have one "critical" comment. I noticed that they travel a lot with cars and buses. I am not that good in history and I do not know how widespread automobiles were at the time, but I think in England they mainly traveled using railways. Only rich, not middle class had cars. As it is important that Lizzy goes by car (woman driving, was it usual at the time?), maybe you could add somewhere why Lizzy has a car and why she knows how to drive (through nursing?).
I hope you update soon, I cannot wait to read more about your very compassionate Lizzy and confused Darcy.
| Lucy65 chapter 6 . 1/24/2009
Thanks for the new chapter! This story is so good & so sad.
| tyc123 chapter 6 . 1/18/2009
I like it!
| tyc123 chapter 5 . 1/18/2009
So Darcy has amnesia, but...
Elizabeth is in love with him.
Richard is in love with her.
Anne is in love with Darcy.
Charles is in love with Anne.
Jane is in love with Charles.
And Collins and Catherine de Bourgh are doing the nasty.
That's all rather Midsummer Night's Dream.
I love it.
| Lucy65 chapter 6 . 1/17/2009
Thank you so much for the new chapter! Collins & Catherine are so amusing! I cannot wait for Elizabeth to go to town. Will they meet? I hope so!
| Lizzyanddarcy chapter 6 . 1/17/2009
I'd given up on you! I'm so glad to see that you posted again.
I'm enjoying your characterizations. Now that we know the characters, I hope we get to see them in action soon.
Thanks for the chappie!
| terid chapter 6 . 1/17/2009
good chapter! all i can say! hurry please I just cant wait!
| nikje chapter 6 . 1/17/2009
Thank you for the update! This is such a beautiful story.
Poor Elisabeth - I hope it will not be too long before she meets Darcy again.
And Catherine Debourgh is in for a nasty surprise - Yay! I do wonder what your plans with Collins are, he's a bit of a mystery for now.
| theliznach chapter 6 . 1/16/2009
I was was so excited to see an update of this! Your Catherine/Collins relationship is definitely an interesting one, it will be interesting to see where it goes. I can't wait for Darcy to get back to Pemberley to lay down the law. Once again, a great read and I truly look forward to more.
| a.marie027 chapter 5 . 12/23/2008
An excellent read so far! You have done a fantastic job of balancing the descriptive elements of the story with the actual progression of the plot.
Please, post another chapter! I am eagerly awaiting the moment when Darcy and Elizabeth are reunited again!
| vivlavide chapter 2 . 12/22/2008
please please please continue this story! i read alot of jane austen ff and this is by far the best story I have ever read!
-a loyal reader
| maryc chapter 5 . 12/18/2008
I have enjoyed reading this story I would like to see it continue. I have been thinking of possiblities and can't wait for the rest.
| doddle chapter 5 . 11/11/2008
after re-reading the story thus far, as a whole, i can't help but wonder, with the last part of this chapter, if that lizzie will actaully end up pregant.
it then gets me thing of how they meet again, there is the link of lizzie going to seek her fortunes in london, where you said darcy is also known. the second more obvious is that of the fitzwillaim link, and if she is pregant, what will the other characters reactions be.
hum... i guess i think to much about it.
i apoligies if me guesses are good or bad, but i simply wanted to express my thoughts. thank you-thank you for all your effort that you've put into the story thus far and i hope you comtinue to do so in further chapters. i really do love reading your works. please update as soon as plossible.
| theliznach chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
I am really enjoying this story so far. It's wonderfully written and I love your Darcy and Elizabeth. The time period itself is also very original and hasn't been done to death in the fandom, which I appreciate. I truly look forward to reading more of this and seeing where the story goes.