Reviews for FORGOTTEN MEMORIES |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a wonderful well written story! Are you going to finish it? Maybe this is the story to remind me why I hate to read unfinished works. You are creative and very talented, thank you for sharing your talent and other stories. Christinebj |
![]() ![]() I hope you still check in here from time to time. It's been years, I know, but I really, really want my happy ending here on such a well written, beautiful story. Granted, some of the characters are not what would be expected, but they all work together, and I want Smithy and Elizabeth back together! PLEASE,! |
![]() ![]() Oh, Smithy, wilt though never come back and finish this for me? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh please don't leave us hanging from such a wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh how I wish you'd come back and finish this beautiful story! it's such a shame to leave this incomplete. an utterly beautifully written piece of week here (': |
![]() ![]() no... please say there is more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope you plan on continuing with this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry that you've abandoned this story. I would have loved to have read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finally realized why your story, Forgotten Memories appears so familiar. I read a similar book more than forty years ago by James Hilton called Random Harvest but it wasn't until I saw the movie version the other day on (TCM) Turner Classic Movies that I was able to connect the dots. So I went back to reread your version (Forgotten Memories) as well as James Hilton version (Random Harvest) again and I find that your story is as thought provoking as James Hilton novel. While there are differences between all three (the novel, the movie & your story) version, the storyline is basically the same. And still love all version! I really admire your unique twist of adding here and there all the various characters from P&P canon. I hope you have not given up on your story and that you’ll find the time someday soon to update. I will dearly love to see how/where Lizzy/Darcy finally ends up in your version. Thank you for sharing your version! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really do hope you finish this story. It's simply beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have you given up on this story? I didn't realize it was incomplete when I started. I hope you decide to finish it! With no one else at Pemberly, it would seem Darcy and Elizabeth would have some time together, perhaps some walks in the morning as they did at Longbourn, some interactions to jog his memory? Another storm? I hope you decide to take this story up again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is an excellent story. Please don't end here! Will has a letter to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just reread this story again and it continues to break my heart with every read. I do hope that you someday will return to this beautiful piece and finally put our lovers' sadness to an end. You are incredibly talented, and I hope you will continue to share your gift with us in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a great story, congratulations! I love your characters and the plot and I hope you continue with it at some point because it's great so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous story as all of your stories are! I came across them by chance and am inordinately grateful! I hope that you are, at least, still writing; if not you should be as you write so well! Becs xx |