It's a great story, congratulations! I love your characters and the plot and I hope you continue with it at some point because it's great so far

Fabulous story as all of your stories are! I came across them by chance and am inordinately grateful! I hope that you are, at least, still writing; if not you should be as you write so well! Becs xx

I hope you'll come back and finish this story! I love how similar this is to P&P but also very much it's own story. Again, hope you'll continue!

This is a wonderful story- update please, please!

As his personal secretary, why doesn't he need her in London? Does he return to have a war memorial erected at Pemberley? I wonder if he'd finally visit Netherfield Park while she is back at her parents'. Will they reunite in the French Riviera or Turkey? Would she quit and become a bookseller after returning from The Grand Tour?

Love your story I surly hope you plan on finishing! PLEASE!

Just wanted to say thank you for what you did write of this fantastic story. Since it's highly unlikely that you'll return to complete it, for whatever reasons, I'll wish you the best in RL and imagine a fitting end to this tale.

Always had a soft spot for Random Harvest and that melancholy that permeates the second half of the film.

I see that it is unlikely you'll ever return to finish this, so I just wanted to say thank you for the chapters you did write and I hope you are leading a great life. I'll allow my mind to solve the pieces of the puzzle you have presented us and always keep in mind that last scene of the movie, when she runs to him, they embrace and all is well in the world.

Hugs!

Please update again soon as I am completely in love with this story!

...Is this the end?! Please, please let this not be the end! I would so love to see the scene where Darcy finally remembers Elizabeth or when Elizabeth tells him about what happened! Lovely story anyway, thank you so much! I live in West Sussex actually- I work at the clinic that used to be the burns unit set up by Archibald McIndoe that was used in WWII! :D

I so love this story, and your full, well written characters. You're probably off writing and publishing novels and have forgotten about us here, wanting so much for you to finish this novel. If you have finished and published it, please let me know so I can buy it and finish it! I have no idea how to find you and beg you, so this is my only recourse.
I don't even know why I bothered to read this again for maybe the 4th or 5th time, but I did, thinking I could just skim through it quickly. But your writing is so compelling that I couldn't skim it, but actually re read it all. If I cannot post this on this chapter, # 22, I'm going to copy it and try each chapter back, as this site only allows one comment per chapter. I hope that you get this plea and either finish posting this story here, or let me know where and how I can read the rest. Thank you, Teresa (taswmom)

Please finish! I love the entire story and setting. (I'm a huge history buff.) PLEASE FINISH THIS!

Are you still here? Do you ever plan on finishing this story? I think that I've asked this on most every chapter, and this site will only let me comment once on each. Are you posting somewhere else? PLEASE! I have loved what you've written so far, and really want to read the rest!
Please let me know...
Thank you, taswmom

I loved this story and have waited soooooo long for you to come back and finish it! Please, please, please do so, soon. Thank you.

Ah, so excellently written. I suppose it has been a year since you last updated which lessens my hope of a new chapter soon or at all - but even if I have to fabricate my own ending, I read it all in one sitting. I did want to review and say how much I loved how you interspersed Jane Austen's P&P world with this one (Netherfield and the picture in the landing). Well done!