Reviews for Permission
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
While I liked the first part of this story, this side not so much. You obviously have no concept of being denied sex for weeks or months. It's not something I would wish on anyone, especially since he didn't allow her to openly give her feedback on if she wanted to play his game or not.
So where did he come up with this out of the blue?
What restaurant would let patrons sit on the others lap? NONE
FabinaForever11 chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
All black and white chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
So... That was pretty amazing, think you could continue this story? Please?
mrsvixter chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
oh my phew... need a drink after that one
Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Really awesome...I especially LOVED the restaurant part!
Keep penning...
Rima2000 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
It's definitely hot in here!
OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
melissaa12 chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Kiera Cullen Salvatore chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
wow. I loved that last part
NY13 chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
He doesn't seem dominant, just a sexual this Bella must be after care, no safe word, no each his own I guess.
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
equally as hot as dualism
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
That was definitely a lot of fun.
Rima2000 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Definitely adding this to my favs. I saved it to read before I go to sleep for hot, sexy dreams and such...grin! It is definitely getting hot in here!
EmmaLeighL chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Great job! Very hot. Liked it better than duality... a little more dirty maybe.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
Nope its on fire in here damn wow mmmmmm so good thank you I loved it
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