Reviews for Permission
Craving2Read chapter 1 . 9/16/2008 HOT HOT.
Islander chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
JerseyBella chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Um, wow!
mailbox killer chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
dam that was hot, is this after Campus Liaisons finish,i could so see this after that
ArchiezCullen chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
VampireCat3 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
That was SO HOT! Domanent edward is the most sexy by far!

ps: where did u get ur bracelet? It sounds awsome!
Shante17 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
I loved that did I love that...hope you continue with one day the roles being switched because I know that if I was Bella I would have been like ' Hell with your rules Edward, I'm fucking you tonight whether you like it or not' Update!
TwilightFreak00 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
well written
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Holy. Freakin'. Fuc&k.

The Gods of Domination have looked down upon you, fair child, and liked what they have seen. You are a very good apostle. You do well in spreading the word. This was fuck*n fantastic.

You should be very proud of yourself. Hell, "I" am proud of you! Dom on, sister.
my bleeding tears of agony chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
lkittle eddie is freaky like it not like the one you did for the contest bu nice
Tulipp chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Different and shocking, nice. But shouldn't they have a safe word or something? I was honestly surprised that wasn't one of the "ground rules." Some way that she can let him know if she is uncomfortable? I know that this is OOC, but still...
babygirl242 chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
hey just wanted to say LOVE the story and LOVE Dualism! you write a dominant sexy Edward very well. is this going to be a chapter story or just a one shot?
IthinkThereforeIwrite chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
hot is not the word!

hahaha i think my room just morphed into hell its so hot.


very hotly done!
kaypgirl chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
WOW. And with that ending, I really hope there's more.
SpecialK199 chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Yes dear, it's very hot at the moment! How do you keep it together to write like that!

LOL ... and to think some people reckon fanfic is nerdy - hell, they don't know what they're missing!

Very well done. More please.
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