|Reviews for Warder tales|
| leorb chapter 33 . 1/3
just finished reading through the whole thing. added it to my follow list.
the characters feel like part of the world for the most.
the fact that the story jumps through time and between the characters kept everything fresh and interesting.
I liked the storyline with the white sister who hunts black ajah, seeing a competent white is pretty cool.
didn't like the "see reason" weave, I think it would be way too useful if the white had it so that kind of stood out.
I also had trouble seeing a red sister manage to hide a warder, I think a red without contempt for men would stand out too much, I would expect the other red sisters to watch her every interaction with men.
I wonder how she'd react after the cleansing of saidin (if this takes place anywhere near that time.)
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/2
Oh man, Anthared and Yamela always get me :,) Fantastic chapter (these aren't tears nope I just have a twig in my eye or something) and I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/1
Awesome work! Thank you for sharing. I love the characters- however, I often had I re-read to make sure who was who. This was less of a problem in later chapters... I suspect for me it was lack of time "anchoring" names to faces... As well as switching POV without a clear indication that we were switching POV from one character to another. Suspense and plot were used very well. Yamela is the most identifiable character... And the dialog is well done, but may also be contributing to the confusion as some of the characters of too similar of voices. I hope that makes sense. Please keep writing!
| AmyrlinEgwene chapter 33 . 12/26/2013
Aww! Thank you thank you thank you! I love it so much...I've got tears in my eyes.
| ASisterOfTheBlue chapter 7 . 12/26/2013
I am, as is quite readable from my name, a sister of the Blue. I'm no special sister, nor an important one. I'm just another sister.
I have read all your stories of this series so far, and I absolutely love it. Surely I will have more to add once I see how you portray my own Ajah's relationship with their Warders. Lomiel is by far the most interesting character of your Aes Sedai, but then again, it seems you've written more about her than any other. It's interesting how the degree of open versus closed affection and dedication is present in the Bond. The hencefar most dedicated has been Masrogen, bonded to Bessal. I also see you found inspiration for that tale in Moiraine recalling how Lan had once run for several days to find someone to Heal her. It was beautiful.
This story, however, is most beautiful, I think, of them all, despite not having read the remainder yet. A Red with a Warder. A stunning statement, and a very important one. Also, much more stunning is how many years have passed since you wrote this. You wrote this way before Androl and Pevara.
I have one slight criticism. I can't tell you the source, it has slipped my mind, but Mr Jordan once stated that there is no such thing as prostitution in his world. Therefore, Watene wouldn't even know the word "whore". There is no such thing.
Keep writing. I like it.
| Janizary chapter 33 . 12/19/2013
Lol. Will you chase the little red spot from a laser pointer as well? :D
Up, you can always go up when you've pinned yourself in a corner. ;)
Excellent chapter. Love getting Anthared's backstory.
| Demonic Wolf Queen chapter 33 . 12/19/2013
ohhhhhh that is so awesome cute and badass all at the same time. I love it!
| Tremaile chapter 33 . 12/18/2013
You're not the only one who loves this. This is wonderful.
| Debby chapter 33 . 12/18/2013
Thank you so much for continuing to write chapters to this story! You are able to find those tiny "what-ifs" and work them in to a story. Actually sometimes I have to wonder if the ideas I have are from the books..or your stories. Well done and Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays and good luck with exams!
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/17/2013
Pat on the head - seconded. Loved this chapter.
| chibimin chapter 33 . 12/17/2013
Yes, you are a good writer. I think you truly deserve that pat on your head. Happy holidays.
| Amyrlin Egwene chapter 32 . 12/11/2013
What a treat, two in less than a month! This one is fascinating. I never imagined this sanareo. You've shown us a bonded pair of siblings, and now a father and daughter. I'm curious to see where you take this tale.
| Amyrlin Egwene chapter 31 . 12/11/2013
Oh Blue Dragon, what a lovely ending! Yamela is so expressive with her warders, but stern when necessary.
I really enjoyed the part where she bonded the twins. I always wondered how she could tell them apart, and that bit where she describes the differences between them was well done. Keep writing, and we'll keep reading!
| Janizary chapter 32 . 12/11/2013
Nervous habit or procrastination against studying? ;)
How about "How 3 copper coins, a donkey, and a rug salesman made Yamela join the circus"? Eh? :D
| Sita chapter 32 . 12/10/2013
But the bloody greens are the best to read about, except for maybe Jored and Jahra. Poor Jored
PS. Your stories about Warders and Aes Seidai are the best I have found. I have properly read them at least 10 times :P
Please write more. And good luck with your exams. Working on my own(or should be doing it...)