|Reviews for If|
| Yoholic chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
A very well thought out oneshot
| yourfriendlyneighborhoodturtle chapter 4 . 6/7/2011
This is a good story. I hope you'll continue it!
| Imperial Dragon chapter 5 . 4/17/2011
I really liked your short on Bella in Hufflepuff, she is very loyal in her own way.
| digigirl02 chapter 5 . 6/25/2010
Nice, reading about Bella in Hufflepuff was great.
| haruku chapter 4 . 10/23/2009
the ending is expected,
but I don't believe it.
I don't think that Dumbledore would
have just stood by and watched as Dorea Potter
grew up and became an average teenage girl.
I think something would have happened.
Not this mundane, almost idiotic death.
| iolah chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
These are absolutely fantastic. They are ridiculously interesting to read and I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Please update soon!
| Il'Diko chapter 5 . 1/3/2009
Your new name confused me... I was wondering why don't you update and I saw you already did! :)
Wow, I would have loved to read more, this was an interesting idea indeed, and Umbridge was priceless! Nice characterisation of the adults, particularly Walburga!
| Varietygirl9143 chapter 5 . 12/3/2008
Hmm that would be interesting. I confess I've never even considered putting Bella into Hufflepuff, but you're right, it would be rather fascinating to read...
| pip chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Wow, this is a really good satrt. Creepy...
| Chanteur d'ombre chapter 4 . 11/8/2008
| songbird peals chapter 4 . 11/6/2008
Beautiful! You write so gorgeously, it's always a pleasure to read your work! I love the whole chapter - every phrase, every word of it! Simply perfect!
Thanks for posting!
| LadyAlmondstar chapter 4 . 11/3/2008
Loved this chapter :) Strange to think how Petunia could have mothered Harry if he had been a girl, but then of course she did love Lilly once.
Poor Dorea she didn't have a chance, she was completely muggle. These are all quite sad, but they do make you think. Almost poetic. Anyway loved it :)
| x17SkmBdrchiczxx chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
ohh I loved the twist. very nioce. I liked how petunia pampered her. I could see that actually happening. It was a very sad ending.. though most of your endings are quite sad. I can't wait until you update Shadowlit Facades! Great work!
| gredior chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
wow. this is nice!
| Il'Diko chapter 4 . 10/26/2008
Oh my, this was fantastic! You kinda continued The Porcelain Princess... I loved it! You have such an imagination! It was sad, that she declined Dumbledores offer... I would have liked to see how she coped in the wizzarding world! A really, really amazing chap!