Reviews for The Miko and the Demon Lord
Guest chapter 9 . 7/3
The plot of the story is great but it's VERY cpnfusing. I mean there are some important stuff that you missed you keep creating a shortcut for the story but it's not working because you missed out on some things, your story is not constant sometimes the story goes back and forth. Like for example, this chapter your talking about the future after sesshomaru healed from the injury and then the next chapter you'll go back to when she took him to the healers. It's really confusing. I advice you to not create a shortcut of the story because people will get confuse, if you want to go back you could have typed a flashback or something and put it in italic so that we'll know what is happening. I know you are very busy but then take your time writing a story because we're not rushing you. If you rush these things you'll and up confusing the readers. Your story os supposed to voice your opinion to get the people to understand your message. You can't rush these things for you will never be understood nor will you be heard. Oh, and you should also check your spelling. That's all...
nekochanlover69 chapter 4 . 1/24
Sesshy is so nice creepy lol great story.
nekochanlover69 chapter 1 . 1/24
Guest chapter 9 . 10/19/2014
your story is really confusing. im not reading anymore!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/19/2014
how did inuyasha get there i thought he was with kikiyo
Brittney Thomas chapter 9 . 9/10/2014
I like this it's really good!
Brittney Thomas chapter 2 . 9/10/2014
This is great ! Job well done!
Brittney Thomas chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
I like this story!
Love the puppy chapter 4 . 2/13/2014
Thumbs up I'm really loved it
Love the puppy chapter 3 . 2/13/2014
:-) okay
Love the puppy chapter 2 . 2/13/2014
Love it
Love the puppy chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
GoddessOfInuYokai chapter 11 . 6/29/2013
Lol I wuv this story :p
LiKiyoshi chapter 11 . 6/9/2013
Nice job, though I get confused with the change of POVs sometimes and then get frustrated. Not that I'm telling you to not switch point of views throughout the whole fan fic, I strongly advise you not to do so too often. Just my personal preference, so it's fine overall.
Winter Wolf chapter 11 . 4/29/2013
I loved the story and the whole storyline, but it would often skip entire parts inbetween chapters. A lot of the spelling was plain awful and unreadable, and it was very generic, but I really appreciate the storyline. It was good, and I liked the ending, but it did not flow.
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