|Reviews for Indy, Rakia, and thou|
| ColorfulClouds chapter 1 . 1/8
This was great. Perfect Lemon to Fluff ratio! I'd love to collab with you! Shoot me a P.M.
| Day of the Wolf chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
That was pretty fucking hot!
| vuarapuung chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
It was messy :P.
On the whole I liked it. It was quite witty in places, but the smutty bits probably could do with a little glossing over. I'm no expert in the subject, but stuff like "the nerves of his foreskin lighting on fire" sounded a bit, well, daft.