|Reviews for A Passion for the Fight|
| True Colours chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Awesome. I love all the blow-by-blow fight stuff. Please continue this.
| Static-Lightning chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Well it is nice to read something that is well written for a change, if a few gramar mistakes but hey don't we all make them? The writing itself is enough to make me come back for more and i enjoyed reading it. On a constructive note, try to add a bit more plot.
| PunkiePenguin chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
The beginning is great. It takes a while to find out what is going on, which makes people want to find out more. The description is really good, i can see it all in my head. there is less descrpition as you get to the end. but it's stil great.
please keep writing.
| Nyxelestia chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Hm...interesting. I like the start. The way Yassen snuck up on John when John was lecturing and facing away was great. The thrusting and kissing was nice, if a little bit sudden. The lead in to it was great, though.
Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
| vampassassin chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
O, yay! Is this a one-shot, or something more? If it's just a one-shot, pplleeaasse write more!