Reviews for Card Tricks
edlovesjuicyfruit73 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
I love Victor. I love Markus. Could the two together in a car playing a card trick be any better?

This was great! I'm kinda out of it right now, slightly, so it makes me happy that you were able to produce something so awesome in as few words as you did. The descriptions of the cards were realistic and I really like their interactions.

They were all in character and I really got into their card trick there. This story calmed me, for some reason. It was a very calm setting; a nice twist from my dark stories...

Very nice work! I loved it!

~Juicy (Sorry for the delay in reviewing this!)
Spyro Girl21 chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
Yay, I'm the first reveiw. Wasn't that bad, although it was confusing to figure out who was talking when at the end of it. And I thinks it's a souvereir for their worderful time at the airport. (I would know, I've had an 8 hour plane delay before.)