|Reviews for Resident Geek|
| dollegirl chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
ANOTHER AMAZING CHAPTER BB!
Seriously...your description of his glasses and just him in all his geeky glory totally turned me to mush. I felt warm in all my secret places...guh...ungh...LOVE HIM...need I say more?
Your writing is brilliant...and you? Well, I just love you. You know that...
| agengr2004 chapter 2 . 9/3/2008
Barrens chat! LOL, that's awesome! :)
You're obviously a girl after my very own Lvl 70 Paladin Texan heart. Great story, I'm crushin' hard on geeky Edward.
| Call-me-Cassandra chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
Can I just say how incredibly happy this story makes me? I love geeks and I admit that I am one as well. I was totally psyched by the shout out to Firefly in Ch 1...which is possible the greatest show ever concieved and I am still mourning it's loss. Gimme more!
| annniej13 chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
You are not the epitome of evil! You gave us 2 chapters is 2 days! You are the epitome of awesomeness. Loved the chapter! I really did not see that coming, but I love how bold Bella was. Edward must have been so shocked!
I am hoping that Jake was the unwanted admirer. We don't need Jake coming in here and messing with things.
Looking forward to more! :)
| katydid2363 chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
Edward just has to say yes! Love that Bella is being the aggressor in this chapter. I don't think Emmett will give him too hard of a time when he learns he left with a girl. Loving geeky Edward and this story!
| grtchn chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
YES! I love this! Geek edward and it's NOT a one shot! Keep up the good work!
| barbiedoll123 chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
edward say yes
| justm chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
go with her edward! update!
| lheartlibros chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
ah I can't believe you left it like that, I'm dying for the next part! will he say yes, gosh i hope so, and she better tell him how she feels and not be dumb haha
| cmw24 chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
OMG It's like you and I were seperated at birth. There is nothing hotter than a hot guy in glasses. UNG UNG UNG! I also loved Dean Cain and Lois & Clark. Gah, this story is so going to be my crack! Please update again soon. I love it. BTW...I am pattzgirl on twilighted.
| writeswithcrayons chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
I would choose Clark over Superman any day... I love Clark *swoon*
And I wonder what Emmett thought? I mean, he was looking right at him :P
Please update soon, I love this story!
| A Wilde Handful chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
I love how Bella is so attracted to geeky Edward. And the whole glasses thing cracked me up. I actually had a chat with someone a few days ago about how black rimmed glasses instantly remind her of Clark Kent.
And Edward is going to say yes. . . that is, if he can even talk. Hehe. Good job!
| A Wilde Handful chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
OME, Joss Whedon. Haha. I have a feeling I'll love this story. If you throw in some Buffy references in EPOV, it'll amuse the heck out of me.
I love geeky Edward too. :) Good job.
| Rhiannon Summer chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
this is so awesome! you have to update or i'm going to kill you. then bring you back to life so you can write more.
| shwriteme chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
I love this story. I love geeky Edward. He's one of my favorites I think-at least at this point he is.
The scene is well written. It is short and to the point. I get a good feeling for Bella's character here. She isn't as interesting to me as Edward is yet, but I think that is very difficult to achieve.
Yes you are evil for leaving it there. I do see the interest in leaving the reader wanting more. I understand that and applaud you for the effort. However, I'd prefer if the scene wasn't split up. Finish the scene and leave enough open at the end of the scene to keep the reader guessing. At least that is my advice.
One other small point was in the beginning, when you have Bella thinking a lot of things including bringing up old TV shows while waiting for Edward's response. The timing feels a bit too long-like you are trying to fit too much into that short span of time. It might be more effective if you had her thinking these things while looking at him across the room-before she touches his arm. When you change POV it is acceptable to go back a bit in time into the other person's head and that would give her more time to think these things without us wondering how long she was standing there staring at him.
I'm rambling here I know. Sorry.
That is a very small point. I'm being picky. Just wanted to leave some constructive criticism. It is difficult to turn off the editor in me. But I just want you to know that I love your story and I wouldn't bother if I didn't think it was worth it.
Anxiously awaiting more. Not that I'm spoiled or anything. :)