Reviews for Resident Geek
CullenLove chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
Was it... "It was my pleasure"?

As I was reading that I was thinking I'd like to hear him say that when they've been doing something naughtier than talking ;)

But I'm glad they didn't, because it makes Edward seem geekier and cuter. LOL. I'm a sucker for hot geeky Ed.
shwriteme chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
Okay, I didn't think the last chapter sucked - really. I just wanted to point out the problems with timing. It is much easier to see things in other people's work than in your own. Always. That's why we have editors. :)

Now, this chapter was all kinds of awesome. I loved the interaction-the dialogue. I loved being in geeky Edward's head. It was wonderful. I liked how insecure he is. It feels like a role reversal to the original story-which makes it all the more interesting.

The chapter was just the right length. You played out the scene in full and yet left us wanting more. I want to know what happens the next day. I want to see their exchange through Bella's eyes (I wouldn't mind seeing a replay of the entire scene in Bella's POV though you probably want to move forward with the story.)

It is really refreshing to see a story set in college where Edward isn't the player with thousands of girls after him. It is really great to see the stereotype turned upside down.

I love geeky Edward. He is so sweet and interesting and sexy. Yum!

Oh and the phrase you were probably giggling over was when he said it was hard to believe that she wanted to be with him and she asked why is it hard. Just a guess, but maybe I'm a 13 yr old boy in my head at times as well. :)

Awesome job.
Rhiannon Summer chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
Awesome. Amazing. Fantastic. Damn i need more adjetives. Awesome chapter. update soon please!
Starset7 chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
THEY ARE SO FACKING CUTE WITH ONE ANOTHER IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY...AND HIS AWKWARDNESS IS JUST ADORABLE...BUT THE FACT THAT SHE IS RESPONDING TO HIM IN SUCH A POSITIVE MANNER IS AWESOME...

THE BEDROOM DESCRIPTION WAS AMAZINGLY ACCURATE OF THOSE OF MY BOYS...I LOVE THEM ALL...AND YOUR EDWARD FOR HAVING THE SAME...

YOU MADE EDWARD SAY/THINK...GUH...I LOVE YOU FOR THAT...

I LOVE THAT SHE REASSURES HIM OF HOW SHE WANTS TO BE WITH HIM, BUT HE STILL REMAINS A BIT CAUTIOUS...AND THAT SHE SEEMS TO SAY WHAT HE WANTS TO...SO IT MAKES IT EASIER FOR HIM TO LET GO...

THEY LOVE HOW THEIR NAME SOUNDS TUMBLING FROM THE OTHERS LIPS...M...SO SWEET...

AND I DON'T THINK THERE WAS ANY SUCKINESS IN YOUR LAST CHAPTER...FOR ME ANYWAY...JUST SAYIN...

YOUR DEFINITIONS AT THE END OF EACH CHAPTER ARE BEYOND COOL...THEY MAKE ME HAPPY...

ALL RIGHT...MY INSIDES ARE ALL WARM AND GOOEY NOW...YOU KNOW HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS STORY...

AND THE D&D REFERENCE? JUST FOR CLARIFICATION...MOST GIRLS DON'T LIKE IT...BUT BELLA IS NOT MOST GIRLS...NOR AM I...BWAHAHAHA
geekgirlhope chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
I woke this morning to this little treat. What a way to start the day. I love Edwards inner monologue or his thought process, killer.
Sarkule chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
i love it :D I
Sophie Girl chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
I didn't think the last chapter sucked! This one was great, ah the anticipation of the first date... Your definitions at the end of each chapter are so funny!
barbiedoll123 chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
aw they were hitting off perfectly until alice showed up
hot 101 chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
Hes going to go blog? that is so cute! I swear I cracked up when he thought that though would be SO awkward if Bella was one of the people who read it!.

This chapter was to sweet thouhg, kinda awkward, still very sweet!.Update soon please.

P.S.I know! I wanted Andie to end up with Duckie to! I was actually very shocked when she didn't! that's how it usually goes...
wtvoc chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
me, caitlin and erica were discussing the inherent socially awkward loveliness of edward talking about his blog.

love, bb.

THANKS FER THE SHOUT OUT

AND THE PRETTY IN PINK REF

SPADER LOVES IT
padfootly chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
Lmaoo. I love how Edward is such a girl. xD Going home to go write about his kiss. bahahaha.
sweetnewmoon chapter 4 . 9/6/2008
I love this story. I like the idea of geeky Edward, it makes him a little more vulnerable and I love the idea of smart and sexy story has great potential. Continue it.

PPMS!
kaypgirl chapter 4 . 9/5/2008
A guess for that line, “Why is that hard?”. And I think that livejournal also counts as a blogging site (more so than the social network sites, since it's all about actually writing your thoughts or ideas), although I'm mainly on it because some people post their fan fic on there before they update on or another site.
justm chapter 4 . 9/5/2008
hooray there going on a date! dang this edward is very shy. lol!
blueheronpl chapter 4 . 9/5/2008
This story is great! It makes me happy when I read it, and I'm cheering along for Edward like some geek cheerleader! Bella too - she deserves a cheer as well! I can't wait till they try to kiss each other again - his glasses will probably fog up!
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