Reviews for Broccoli and the Art of Subterfuge |
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eatteresa chapter 1 . 8/13/2010 LMFAOOOOOOOO that was hilariously cracky. |
AllyKnight chapter 1 . 8/6/2010 LMFAO. I'm going to try to use this on my seven year old brother next time he refuses to eat vegetables. I hope he falls for it, but he likes to stick to this thing called "logic." T.T It's worth a shot, anyways xD |
HerGoldenWings chapter 1 . 7/1/2010 ;P awesome. |
RAGA chapter 1 . 6/28/2010 Oh my goodness, that's hilarious! That really is. I haven't been so impressed with a oneshot for quite some time. This is excellent. XDDD |
jesusfreak100percent chapter 1 . 5/31/2010 Best one yet. The little ending is amazing. |
Peregrinate chapter 1 . 5/28/2010 Muahahahah hehehehehe. Lmfao. ) |
Vtll chapter 1 . 5/22/2010 Oh my. While I was reading this, my mother was instructing my nephew on food. I think I'm gonna use this one when he grows older. :) Very funny. I love it! |
force42 chapter 1 . 5/1/2010 Lovely. Hilarious. I absolutely loved how Harry and Hermione teamed up to get the kids to eat their vegetables and got Teddy in on the act. Your line, "After all, Draco Malfoy was an Unspeakable, and the April tournament had lost him a good amount of his hair. Permanently." was absolutely priceless. Bravo on a story well written. |
MissSilver chapter 1 . 5/1/2010 OMG. I laugh so hard! This is good stuff! |
skepsis66 chapter 1 . 4/12/2010 Lol. Where do you come up with this stuff? |
Anonymous is a pretty bad name chapter 1 . 4/8/2010 xD LOL Yeah, thanks for clearing up that one. Now we know the REAL reasons for everythin' So. damn. funny. |
A Fan chapter 1 . 4/3/2010 First story I read that is actually after the atrocity of the Seventh book. I loved your story. |
Pennilyn Novus chapter 1 . 3/31/2010 Hilarious, but I'm sure you knew that. What I enjoyed about this was the lightness of it, the added bonus of the inter-departmental poker tournaments (brilliant, btw) and the lovely character interactions. I could picture Teddy so easily being a sullen teenaged boy, but snapping out of it long enough to be a co-conspirator in the great broccoli deception. And I liked how you gave us the characteristic of Al being a child-genius without hitting us over the head with it. The script, their scripted dialogue...I was giggling left and right There was nothing extraneous with this story. Everything had a purpose and a place, and the timing was well-executed. It was like a perfect little glimpse into life at the Potter house that gives us an average, everyday moment without all the added drama that seems to happen whenever Harry Potter is around. In short, I liked this very much, and I'll be adding it to my favorites list and reccing it out to my group. Thanks for sharing your talent with us! |
fairyprincesst chapter 1 . 3/27/2010 ! Fantastic Story! |
R. L. Ravenclaw chapter 1 . 3/25/2010 Oh. My. Gosh. This is hilarious! I wonder if that would actually work on kids. I've babysat the two extremes. One that hates vegetables with every bone in her body and the other who eats them like candy and yes I mean broccoli and lots of other vegetables most kids won't touch. Voldemort didn't eat his vegetables...hahaha, man, that's just awesome. |