|Reviews for Team Rose: Version 2,0|
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
so, you're basically just rage quitting on this story/plot line.. it's cool, im not judging you it's just the facts. this could have been FANTASTIC! D: there I've said my spiel, now you can move on with your life.
| JayRyan98 chapter 3 . 3/29/2012
I have to laugh near the part where you said, ""I write fanfic." you think of OOC, poorly written Harry Potter characters screwing eachother", I just found that part really funny.
(By the way, just in case you don't know, this is xXxStar-WhispererxXx) :)
| Crystay chapter 3 . 7/4/2011
Aww your not writingbit anymore ?
That's ard cause people be having things to do, I understand. Well it was good while it lasted and I look forward to read your works!
| Crystay chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
This is really good and interesting.
I Kant wait to read some more!
| Gratz chapter 3 . 7/4/2011
Exactly what the title says because you deserve it! Honey, you are now officially my idol. That's not too weird coming from a stranger... right? XD Well, no matter. You've probably got a lot to do, so I won't ramble on; best of luck in everything you do! Your fans will always be cheering you on~
...That was more cheesy than it sounded in my head, but I think I'm just deliriously happy for you, heh.
| ADarknessInHeaven chapter 3 . 2/6/2010
This would be chapter three.
...I don't mind you taking a break from here. There's no real need for fans to be guilty that you've got a life (Not to say they don't, but I digress.).
...If you don't return, I wish you the best of luck in whatever you do, and I shall support it.
Also, I have a sense of deja vu. It's like I've seen this before, yet you say you've just updated...the message at the end makes it seem like this was written before Christmas.
...Meh. I dunno.
I'll see ya later, Rikku.
| Crunchiecat chapter 4 . 1/22/2009
I don't see why anyone would be mad at you for having a life.
people have to understand that sometimes, miraculously, we have lives and can't continuously submit.
I probably sound harsh but the point is, you have every right to quit, even if I don't want you to.
| CrissytheCat chapter 4 . 12/19/2008
Rikku,(the character nah just jk. P The author)
I'm upset that your leaving. You have been
such an amazing author, you know what? You're truly indescribable. I can't find that
exact word to tell how extremely well you write. The way you describe the characters,
scenes, situations, is so vivid. The way you write is simply wonderful. I may seem like I'm over-stating
the things I'm saying, but I mean it all. That's why it pains me to know you're going to leave
What's the most disappionting on my part as the reader, is the fact that those ideas
that I'm excited to read will not be written and the stories you already have will not be continued.
You did say that you don't know if you'll be back, and that still means you have the possibility of
coming back to submitting though. I know the future is not set in stone, and I'm acting like you're
leaving forever but that's how I feel though...
Even if you may not submit any more fics and may not continue the ones you already have, know that
I'll still hope you will, I'll wait. I'm not just upset though, I understand you. Life is tough, and
sometimes you're not able to do what you want. Even if you can't submit please promise me one thing,
that you won't stop writing (I know you are writing a novel, but just promise) you have a beautiful talent
and that would be a huge waste. Well, I feel I've ran out of things to say, once again I'm sorry if this
is long. Even longer than that last review. I'm also sorry that I didn't reply to your pm. I thought I
would be a burden, especially when you seemed so busy with this story...Well, if you need anyone to talk
to, just pm me. _ Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays Rikku!
| Aika08 chapter 4 . 12/18/2008
Hey, you do what you WANT to do! So it's no big problem!
| crimson-obsidian-rose chapter 4 . 12/17/2008
I have to say, I'm sorry to hear you're leaving. You write amazingly well, and I will miss seeing your work.
With that out of the way, I can say that I completely understand what you're saying. It's alright that you can't do this, we all have things we have to do that are more important than what we want to do. I will continue to hope for the day that I see an update from you, but in case that doesn't happen, just know that I have always respected you as an amazing author, and that anytime you want someone to talk to, just PM me, alright?
Later, and much love!
| Skyelara chapter 3 . 12/17/2008
Awesome! Man, your style of writing serously sucks me in and wants me to keep reading. I really can't wait to see what happens next. Interesting plot, can't wait to see where you take it :)
Keep up the great work!
| Skyelara chapter 2 . 12/17/2008
holy crap this is so good! Even the introductions-I couldn't stop reading it! I had to be pulled away from the computer to go eat dinner! (Not really, but it felt like it). You have a talent for writing. .Gosh...seriously, amazing. And an original idea too, wahoo! Double wammy of goodness! I seriously can't wait to see what's in store for these three girls :)
| Skyelara chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Wow...this is very interesting! You're a really talented writer and this is such a good story so far. The plot, the characters, everything. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
| Mariko the Cure chapter 3 . 12/9/2008
Reasons I love this:
has SilvAmy,which is growing on me.
blends fantasy and drama.
And tons more nya!This is a fantastic story and I love it so keep up the good work!
| CrissytheCat chapter 3 . 12/5/2008
This chapter was great! I saw some mistakes which were EXTREMELY few.(just things like missing words/using the wrong word like aswas) Honey has quite an oppertunity there too bad it's like Mighty kinda "took it away"...sorta. But there does seem like something fishy about it, or maybe that's just me? Anyways, I really love how you can piece together the right words and make everything seem, perfect nontheless. Keep up the good work and please put up Chapter 4 soon!_
About your other story ideas, I think they are great! I'd like to see "Sway with me" and "Mr. Vamp" up soon. But I'd also really want to see "Framed Twice Over" Silvamy oneshots and Sonic Christmas Specials. I can't believe you only made me choose 4 in that poll! They are actually very well thought out, especially when most just suddenly came to mind. Just three more things to say:
are an awesome writer, don't ever stop doing what your really good at and
make your ideas into a full-time fic, they're too interesting to just let go. )
for the long review, hehe. *sweatdrop*