Reviews for My fallen angel
darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
keep up the good work
Quackyz chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
luv
MaEsTaMa chapter 21 . 4/20/2010
Sorry to say that i didnt like how you wrote the story. In my opinion things move fast for example the part of Mike kidnapping Bella just after they met and stuff like that.
CaseyDawsonFan4Ever chapter 21 . 2/9/2010
Wow this was an excellent story keep up the good work.
Phoenixfeather96 chapter 21 . 9/4/2009
I really love this story.I'm also really happy that Nessie is with someone else rather than Jacob, evryone puts her with Jacob so good 're a GENIUS!

Keep writing. Keep smiling and keep PARTYING!
Anonymous chapter 5 . 7/30/2009
Your last 2 lines of this chapter seem to be from Edwards POV rather than Bellas... just a heads up
Miss.GIGGLE chapter 21 . 7/30/2009
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TheRealOriginalSammy chapter 21 . 7/30/2009
Aww! I Loved That Story!

Poor Joe! I'm Glad He Was Changed! He's Awesome!

Lol!

Awesome Story :) x
teamswitz09 chapter 10 . 7/30/2009
omh this is awesome! that's so cool that they're all vampires now! this rocks! ]
teamswitz09 chapter 9 . 7/30/2009
omh poor bella! i really hope she's okay. she should really learn to stay away from the woods.
teamswitz09 chapter 8 . 7/30/2009
OMFG! poor bella! '[ i'm so glad edward found her. i wish edward killed mike. fucking pervert.
teamswitz09 chapter 7 . 7/30/2009
aww that was so sweet. haha i liked the phone dares. lol. poor jasper. sixth grade must've sucked for him. xD
teamswitz09 chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
that was AWESOME! i fricking hate mike! i love edward! ] him and bella are so sweet together! ] 33
teamswitz09 chapter 5 . 7/30/2009
aww that was seet. i can't believe they kissed! ]
teamswitz09 chapter 4 . 7/30/2009
yay! they're going on a date! i feel bad about charlie. [ oh well. that was sweet that edward hugged her. good story.
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