|Reviews for For Your Eyes Only|
| KissOfDeathJE chapter 48 . 3/6
I know it has been a while but... This story is SO good! Update, update, update! :(
| Jenna Jade chapter 48 . 10/30/2013
So... noticed you haven't updated since 2010! Wow, what along interlude-but I imagine real-life has rear it's ugly head. Just curious as to when this will be finished and or updated if at all? Love the story in parts and in it's entirety so far. I can tell at certain points though when you've gotten tired or run out of sub-context 'cuz you tend to just rattle on about the inconsequentiality of one character or another with things not entirely relevant to the story plot.
However, that aside, I truly have enjoyed this particular story twist so far-point en case though, I feel that your leaning towards a Jack kill off or endeavoring to replace Jones with Jack as Captain of 'The Flying Dutchman'-I could be wrong(cuz wouldn't it be just fabulously awesome Jack come out of this predicament he's got himself into safe and sound-with girl en'tow-on the other side as only Captain Jack Sparrow flare can.)but I rather doubt it with how your dropping oh-so-obvious-hints. 'Death... is a choice' being your biggest one.
Death IS a choice and one so like Jack to choose instead of waiting for it to calmly collect his soul without cause or reason. There is always one more person on the face of the planet that Jack will always want more than anyone or anything else; and that
| Jenna Jade chapter 23 . 10/25/2013
When does she get pregnant? Still waiting for this to happen. They've had more than a time or two together for this to have occurred already... just curious really, know your loosely following the original story plots but I do so imagine your putting you own twist on things-things being that which include Elizabeth's pregnancy aboard the Pearl in the midst of this most troublesome development occurring for the ever cunning and charmingly handsome Captain Jack Sparrow. Would be nice for a bit of coming inside info on the subject.. just for excitement purposes really. So something to look forward to too!
Please let me know ether way although it will be a bit disappointing should this not come to fruition between the inseparable couple.
| Guest chapter 48 . 9/28/2013
Awesome please update !
| Guest chapter 48 . 3/22/2013
You have to finish this! It's great! I love all your stories and have read them all but this is the best! YOU HAVE TO DO IT! NOW
| Mademoiselle.Claire chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
So tender! Awesome!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
So tender kiss..awesome!
| cute chapter 48 . 6/3/2012
I am dying for the next part miss pearl! I have quite litterally spent all day reading these chapters and I must say, I prefer this story to the movies lol! Just goes the books/writings are always better than the movies! It is just so beautifully romantic! I adore it! I don't even think of elizabeth/lizzie or jack as kiera and johnny anymore. I think Jack sparrow as how he looks in the movies but I picture Elizabeth as a much sweeter, tender pale beauty. I love it! The only tip or request would be to detail YOUR world a touch more, for even though its based on potc you are the write of this piece! You know like say stuff about what the ships looks like, and yeah i have seen the movie but I want to know your view on how it would look, like jacks cabin etc. Also your detailed idea of elizabeth would be cool too, just a thought or two.
Very sorry it is so long to write. I just hope you havent given up on this story.
| Katherine88 chapter 48 . 2/11/2012
When is the next chapter going up? I love the story sooo much. Well done for all your hard work. :-)
| cara-tanaka chapter 48 . 12/27/2011
Love this update soon
| Chi okami 31 chapter 48 . 12/26/2011
awsome story, can't wait for more
| CaptainThetaSigma chapter 48 . 10/13/2011
This is such a fun read! It's very well written. Poor James...
But I love Jack and Lizzie, and Rosalind and Will. I don't know if you've abandoned this story, but I dearly hope you haven't. Update soon, please.
| Kay Nastalia chapter 48 . 10/7/2011
Love, love, love! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| xXevanderXx chapter 48 . 8/19/2011
OMG! i loved this chapter you really outdid yourself! the drama in it was nice not too dramatic that it got to be annoying but enough where you really see just how much norrington has changed, you did very well and i anticipate your next chapter.
| xXevanderXx chapter 46 . 8/19/2011
okay so i usually wait till i have read all that has been updated before posting but i can't help it this story has taken over my life by force, i stay up till god knows when until i finally pass out on my laptop still on the chapter! i really love this story and i like the ros/will pairing that you have created, very well done! i do hope that you will indeed finish this story for i am very anxious to see what happens in the end!