Reviews for Grains of Sand
revinzy chapter 13 . 5/23/2015
"You've never given me a nickname," Gaara
concluded suddenly and his eyes turned
unexpectedly sad, "Our bonds must be weak."

kill meeeeeeeeeeeeee
revinzy chapter 4 . 5/23/2015
laughed soooo hard this time, naruto was just stupiiiiid lol
revinzy chapter 3 . 5/23/2015
Stupiiiid Narutooooo! But I like it, lol. Go GaaHina!
Pokemon Trainer White chapter 7 . 4/27/2015
Naruto's like a girl giving advice to one of her besties (Gaara)

So, they're like the male version of Sakura and Hinata (lol)
Pokemon Trainer White chapter 6 . 4/27/2015
Lol XD

Ignorance is a bliss.
C3siah chapter 35 . 4/9/2015
Great and hilarious story.
Iris chapter 35 . 4/7/2015
OH EM GEE. I have no words to describe how much i love this story. *bows* thanks for writing it!
Iris chapter 3 . 4/6/2015
I kid you not when I say I am spluttering and dying of laughter at your every chapter ending XD
DineyBlue chapter 32 . 3/30/2015
Great story
Hinatta chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Another long Hinata story!
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
PM me to be staff or if you know of any others!
Look for it here: ...
fanfiction(.-com)/community/Strong-Hinata/119097/

Hinatta..
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GalanthaDreams chapter 23 . 1/24/2015
Oh god! Poor Iruka... But it was so, so hilarious-I probably looked like a witch, what with all the cackling I did, to the other people in the cafe, but I don't care. Comedic gold. And the Haku and what the term precious means to Naruto and Gaara was gorgeous, it really gave things more depth and perspective.
GalanthaDreams chapter 18 . 1/24/2015
This story is really opening up possibilities-and in the most unexpected and sweet ways! You obviously have a strong grasp on the characters and everything progresses so naturally-from Gaara and Hinata's growing affection and the honestly surprising and addictive but short scene between Ino and Naruto, his comeback was swoon worthy.
ItaHina13 chapter 11 . 1/10/2015
Hate your portrayal of Neji and how Hinata talks back, absolutely appalling. Yes he can get over protective but she's always been fragile and look how she got herself into problem and she's his younger sister, where's the respect?
Found Hinata too OOC in this one. I ADORE YOUR WORK up till this chapter, somehow in this one, I was thoroughly disappointed.
TheBrokenReflection chapter 6 . 11/5/2014
Hahahahahaha-gasps for breath-
Naruto is so freaking hilarious!
Trust him to thrust an embarrassing situation on poor Hinata.
And poor, clueless Gaara.
This fanfic is amazing!
TheBrokenReflection chapter 3 . 11/5/2014
Hahahahahahahahahaahaha -takes a deep breath in- ahahahahahaha!
God, this story is so funny. Especially Naruto and his misunderstanding.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
:D great work!
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