Reviews for Grains of Sand |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "You've never given me a nickname," Gaara concluded suddenly and his eyes turned unexpectedly sad, "Our bonds must be weak." kill meeeeeeeeeeeeee |
![]() ![]() ![]() laughed soooo hard this time, naruto was just stupiiiiid lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stupiiiid Narutooooo! But I like it, lol. Go GaaHina! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto's like a girl giving advice to one of her besties (Gaara) So, they're like the male version of Sakura and Hinata (lol) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol XD Ignorance is a bliss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great and hilarious story. |
![]() ![]() OH EM GEE. I have no words to describe how much i love this story. *bows* thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() I kid you not when I say I am spluttering and dying of laughter at your every chapter ending XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another long Hinata story! I'll add this story to my Hinata Community PM me to be staff or if you know of any others! Look for it here: ... fanfiction(.-com)/community/Strong-Hinata/119097/ Hinatta.. 7 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god! Poor Iruka... But it was so, so hilarious-I probably looked like a witch, what with all the cackling I did, to the other people in the cafe, but I don't care. Comedic gold. And the Haku and what the term precious means to Naruto and Gaara was gorgeous, it really gave things more depth and perspective. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really opening up possibilities-and in the most unexpected and sweet ways! You obviously have a strong grasp on the characters and everything progresses so naturally-from Gaara and Hinata's growing affection and the honestly surprising and addictive but short scene between Ino and Naruto, his comeback was swoon worthy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hate your portrayal of Neji and how Hinata talks back, absolutely appalling. Yes he can get over protective but she's always been fragile and look how she got herself into problem and she's his younger sister, where's the respect? Found Hinata too OOC in this one. I ADORE YOUR WORK up till this chapter, somehow in this one, I was thoroughly disappointed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahahaha-gasps for breath- Naruto is so freaking hilarious! Trust him to thrust an embarrassing situation on poor Hinata. And poor, clueless Gaara. This fanfic is amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahahahahahahaahaha -takes a deep breath in- ahahahahahaha! God, this story is so funny. Especially Naruto and his misunderstanding. I can't wait to see what happens next! :D great work! |