In my own opinion, its pretty awsome, kid.

They have manged to stay in fair bit of character, and the ending of this intriuged me. I would like longer chapters, but everyone always does,right?

Anyway, good job. (

"You guys didn't tell me you were dating."

XD

I love it! Please write more! :)

I liked your story so far, this is very interesting, so please keep writing!

wow...good story you need to update!