|Reviews for Puzzle of My Heart|
| twlightbella chapter 11 . 9/25
Edward proposed to Bella
| twlightbella chapter 12 . 12/12/2013
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/1/2011
Update and i want them to have a baby boy they got together fast though and amanda seemsnyo haven gotten over her real mother to fast
| brittany08forever chapter 12 . 5/27/2010
I LOVE IT PLS UPDATE SOON
| princess1996 chapter 12 . 7/21/2009
why did you put the time frame so close together?don't get me wrong,i like this story,im just curious.
| kel09 chapter 12 . 7/11/2009
Your story is so cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| 21Skadoosh chapter 12 . 4/20/2009
This story made me want to projetile vomit on the wall.
Normal, LOGICAL people DO NOT SAY I LOVE YOU after ONE week, they don't move in with each other after TWO weeks, and they don't get married within THREE MONTHS of KNOWING ONE ANOTHER! Bella is a lunatic, and Edward had to be in a car accident or something, because the compassion center in his brain is damaged! NO ONE TAKES A FEW MONTHS TO GET OVER A DEATH OF SOME ONE THEY LOVED- let alone his wife that he claimed to love. No child- even if they are four- would accept some one that easily, and Esme and Carlisle must be raving lunatics as well.
"Well, son, you've been here a week, and you already have another daughter and a girlfriend! Good job forgetting your dead wife that fast!"
This is NOT intended to be a flame, it is intended to get you to actually SPEND TIME thinking out your plot line- give the characters FEELING! Give them OOMPH! Give them a PERSONALITY for Christ's sake!
I just want you to take the time that falling in REAL love takes, respect your characters, respect your story, and above all, respect and refine your writing ability.
| mel1997 chapter 12 . 4/3/2009
| Shania Lambert chapter 7 . 2/11/2009
this is a great story i luv it already
| Shania Lambert chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
its really good i like it
| xx-twilight7-xx chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
Excellent first chapter..
Aww lily and amanda sound so cute.. cant wait for them to meet
| mailbox killer chapter 11 . 1/2/2009
| TwilightFan104 chapter 11 . 1/2/2009
That was a beautiful proposal. Now bring on the drama!
| April Bloom chapter 11 . 1/2/2009
I love a story that is about a love that cannot be denied. :) Good chapter.
| LunaLilyWeasley chapter 11 . 1/2/2009
awesome chapter i betcha for the drama Kyles coming bak