Reviews for Babysitting
siruisblack18 chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Loved this :) I thought the characters were extremely weel written as well!
TwoRubySlippers chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
i knew edward was good... but good enough to withstand brian? not so sure. babysitting evil children is not so fun. but i do think that edward would make it better!

great story. i always thought a looking glass was a mirror though. anyway.

thanks for a fantastic read!
lovabl3loz3r chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
man if only all human fics where this - good, intresting, amazing, funny and eaisly realting
bohemianbum chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Aw man, this is a one shot? It's so good! I'm not the kind of person who usually likes all human Twilight fics, but this one was written so well, and you really captured the characters' personalities. I swear I will review everything you ever write if you continue this!
his babi seal chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
LOVED IT! I usually don't like human stories as much but lately I'm starting to like them more. But only if they're really good and YOURS IS GOOD! That was so cute. I think it's a really good idea for you to broaden your horizons a bit with a go at a human story, haha. Awesome job, you're a fabulous writer!
euphoria falls chapter 1 . 9/1/2008


please keep it going?

Mizra chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
I giggled incessantly over this. I don't read all-human fics often (much at all really) but this was a good idea. Actually, this was one of my ideas.. guess I should have written it already! LOL

Great work, especially all the inside references to Edward being/not being a vampire. And Emmett... ah, Emmett. Classic. Sounds exactly what brothers would do to each other.

I'm sad now that it's ONLY a one-shot. :(

*tries to dazzle you into writing more*
Kuroi Garyuu chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
this was great! emmett is hilarious!
momoParty chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
yay! that was good, especially for your first all human. i hope you keep writing!

latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Enjoyed it. Why didn't any of my babysitting jobs turn out like that? LOL!
mrdarcylover chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
i love it. please make this your first story to update. ithink your doing a great job for your first human story.
Breathlessly Wicked chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
I like it! Sad it's a one-shot but I still thought it was nice! :)

Siy Rowling?
EdwardRoxMySox chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Ugh, why does it have to be a one shot? Its so good! I definately want Edward's POV, this story was amazing! Please hurry and update! I'll be waiting!
xxI-luv-Edwardxx chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
aww that was so cute!

I was kinda hoping you would continue this but i guess not...

Anyways yes you should definitely write this in EPOV!
stormiblizzard chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
i would like to take this time to express my deep love of fanfiction. i absolutly adored this story.
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