Bro when Naruto fights Madara have Naruto try to find out how he got to have a body out of the reanimated jutsu so he can bring back his lover

This really made me cry some much

Damn cute

Boku was docta, Tony Tony choppa..

For my own peace of mind, I’m going to imagine that Naruto healed, got strong, beat up Akatsuki and is living happily ever after with Hitomi.

Really wish this story was finished. I love just about everything in this!

Babies don't actually smile that's gas it's not until 2-4 months old that they develop a 'social' smile. But I get your just trying to make her cute and stuff

Just as what I predicted, lol.
Naruto's decision and wrong interpritation how "to be a man", backing out of training to master Senjutsu cause he wanted to be there for Kensha and the baby is the very same choice that leads to her death. Predictable, it was screaming this outcome plain as day based on the previous chapter.
And I liked her character design too, then she just died, can't say I'm happy with the outcome and then on the next chapter I'm just guessing they're gonna berate him for all his decisions, and I would too. Huh don't feel like looking into that one

Kind of an OOC Naruto, to even be afraid, and step back.
Even if this ever does happen to him, sure he'd panic, but he'd bounce back, he'd never be afraid, not even of what others around him will feel or think about him.

I saw where this was going and I’m still shocked.

i've now reached the limit of t his story, but i have no doubt that i will be returning at a later date. my current level of sleep exhaustion (i'm moving into 24hrs awake after five days of three hours each night) and so am struggling to focus on the undertone of the story making me feel slightly wiplashed because i'm not able to think and understand like i normally would when reading such an intrecate and thought out story. This is a well ready, and planned, story as far as i can tell up to this point and i'm sure the few chapters i have yet to read would be just as good.

This was a good story!

nooo u abandoned so sad

Actually tragic that the story took a turn like this before being abandoned for over 10 years.

Honestly, this is a masterpiece