Reviews for Eternal Night
Ray Pest chapter 17 . 11/3/2014
I like this gg
Fan Fictional Authoress chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
'Mommy, where was I born?'

'On a blimp.'

ADHD Fairy Princess Minky chapter 3 . 6/6/2011
Cute chapter! XD
ADHD Fairy Princess Minky chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
Good chapter; still feels like it's moving too fast. But I'll keep reading because - who knows? - you might have become better as the story goes on. :)
ADHD Fairy Princess Minky chapter 1 . 6/6/2011

The chapter seemed to be moving a little fast though...
AttackonBakura chapter 3 . 7/4/2010
LOL when Malik yelled "you Lie" it reminded me of Invader Zim. You lie! You LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEE!

AttackonBakura chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
ooo this is cooll I can't wait to read more! _
Miko Hayashi chapter 14 . 6/26/2010
OMG MALIK IS BEING NICE! WHAT THE CRAP IS GOING ON? XD IT'S THE END OF THE ! Haha lol good story so far. :3 Malik is such a jerk but jerks need love too, right? I like Marik more though. XD
Miko Hayashi chapter 3 . 6/24/2010
Ok I've got a number of things I wanna say XD

Malik (or Yami Marik) tossing his hair like that made me think of Prince Charming from Shrek 2 when he went out to go rescue Princess Fiona XD

And Bakura wanting a hug? I thought of Malik asking for one and a parody song came up in my mind where he said that his hugs give you cancer. I was like wtf? XD

And when Malik was being stared at by Kaiba and Yami, all I could think of was Marik saying "IGNORE ME!" Just like he did in Yu-Gi-Oh The Abridged Series XD

And Venom? Really? That immediately made me think of Spider Man XP

And awww does Malik have a sweet side? He must be a cuddler. lol
Shadow Dice chapter 2 . 5/30/2010
Great story, wonderful plot and great characters ) I hope you update soon :D
James Birdsong chapter 12 . 9/13/2009
Maybe good.
James Birdsong chapter 11 . 8/22/2009
Awesome maybe
I Have Finally Moved chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Yikes! Poor (lucky?) Shilo! Best lines were the ones about the plane. (Mummy, where was I born? On a blimp.)