Reviews for Uninvited
JBubbles chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Uhm... I didn't like the ending. Wich was somewhat disapointing...

'Cause, really, I think it was great to thought about Hiei's feellings too, when on ocasion of the bastard Kuronue's impostor. But you didn't centered on the psychological, or emotional, consequences on Hiei. And Kurama's or Youko's efforts didn't complemented well enough.

But I liked the fic in general, not very much, but it's important that the intentions matters.
Black Lotus Flower chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Yeah, Hiei's so quiet there has to be something going through his head at those types of moments. This was kinda short so there isn't much else I can say... good job. I liked it.
Chaseha-Wing chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
not bad, kind of cute for a 1-shot . Nice work.