|Reviews for Movement|
| Raptorcloak chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Good story!Mind making the baby a girl and naming her Kushina?
Because of Tayuya's personality,Kushina would be just like her and her grandmother.
| Conflict chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
Short. But a nice break from reading the 'epics' specialy when they don't ever seem to be completed.
| Voidangel Soren chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
Yeah, let's just hope so.
Being a father myself, as well as a heartless bastard, I don't really know what you're going on about, but I'm sure I'll find out next time.
| The Crimson Apocrypher chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
I smell this as being the prelude to your NaruTayuya fic where the story focuses around their daughter after she became a ninja.
Am I right?
Anyways, this was actually very good despite it's length, but it protrayed everything you promised. Good work on it.
| Xarkun's Shadow chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Ha... that was pretty damn good writing... could've been longer, but it was great nonetheless...
| AnotherFanfictionAddict chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Damn that was good. I mean really good... :)
| SaiyanWarrior200 chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Way too short, could've used about three hundred more words. Nice try though.
| Lord-Strath chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Agreed , nice short story.
| Haraio chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Aw, that is so cute _ I love your Naruto and Tayuya fanfics. They are just too adorable