|Reviews for The Thirst for Midnight Sun|
| Evening Rise chapter 6 . 7/7/2012
The beginning of this chapter was archingly sweet.
Shouldn't the thought of bella and alice as sisters cheer edward up some? I mean, I do realize that he doesn't want her changed, but there his not even a hint of changing bella in that thought.
I'm kind of disappointed, though - I wae hoping you would explain edward's statement about the movie in biology in greater details...
| Evening Rise chapter 5 . 7/7/2012
Uh oh - poor jakob (and mike, though I don't like him enough to pity him)
he's cute, though - I always liked jake. I guess I can see were edward is coming from, regardless. It makes sense that they don't like each other, despite the fact that jakob probably is a tiny little bit more deserving of bella (at least he doesn't oogle her tooo much (from my point of view, not edward's))
And oh - don't you have to absolutely adore alice? she's just so... alice! There's simply no way not to love her.
But if edward keeps going like this, he will convince me that he is selfish. hoe can he do that to his favorite sister?
The ending was so horribly sweet! Who would have guessed?
| Evening Rise chapter 4 . 7/7/2012
It's a good thing edward didn't stick around, continuing to listen to jakob - somehow, I doubt he would have been able to leave bella's side if he had seen her flirting.
He's fighting with himself a lot, isn't he? But luckily, we all know that this is a fight he can only end up loosing
I absolutely adore how edward's point of view shows that his self control is not as perfect as bella always seems to think. even now, at the beginning of their relationship, he can't really deny her anything, can he? It's just too sweet
I'm sorry you recieved flames - in my opinion, at the very least, they are totally undeserved. the only critism that I have is that sometimes, you could dive deeper into edward's thought process. but that seems to be going in the right direction, if I'm not mistaken...
| Evening Rise chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
I totally agree with bella's opinion on favorites, especially books. it's just to hard to compare them, let alone choose one above all others.
Edward's jealousy in regards to romeo is sooo cute, you just got to live him. jasper's commenting on it was hardly fair though, although it was definitely funny - I was laughing so hard all of the sudden that my family probably thought I was going crazy
what's with the chocolate comment though - I didn't get that in the slightest. I would google it know, but I just can't keep myself from reading your story... maybe later
| Evening Rise chapter 2 . 7/7/2012
Edward, daydreaming? The world must be coming to an end!
I always thought it's a good thing that it was edwards turn that day - how would he have explained what he did at night...?
The scene in the corridor is entirely yours, right? I like it, it's very authentic, just typically bella
oh, did I mention that mr. varner is a git? Because he is.
| Evening Rise chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Oh my, isn't he cute?
And of course rosalie and jasper worry...
Esme's point of view is perfectly clear as well, being the essence of what a mother is supposed so be...
| Maneishy chapter 6 . 3/12/2012
I love your writing, I'm sure you could end up being a great writer!but I have one comment about the characters...well Edward is more of a negative person, he isn't so happy about him loving Bella. In fact it HURTS him to know that he loves her, because in his mind, he is robbing everything that could make her happy, leaving him with more negative thoughts. And even if feels happy, he stops his happiness short, thinking he does not deserve it. And about Bella, idk if everyone else thinks like me on this, but she seems to be a bit too daring, which she was in the later books, but on the beginning she was awfully shy, and wouldnt really smile at him if he didn't smile first. Their relationship didn't have much oggly moments, it was really serious.
| Zeb Cullen chapter 14 . 3/7/2012
No, thank YOU for coming back to the style of writing I know and love. I was honestly too awed to comment for the last two chapters, but now I feel as if I must. Just two words, then- YOU ROCK!
| Zeb Cullen chapter 11 . 3/7/2012
Look, I'm really sorry this is on your birthday, but this chapter was TERRIBLE. The astute, deep charm I've come to appreciate in your writing was absent. There was no originality in it. I know you can do better than this, and I really appreciate your effort, but all in all it did not interest me very much.
| Zeb Cullen chapter 10 . 3/7/2012
I wish you the best of luck. This chapter was great, but hope is still my favorite.
| Zeb Cullen chapter 9 . 3/7/2012
W-O-W. So Deep. My favorite chapter so far. You are making me about as thirsty for the rest as Edward thirsts for Isabella's blood.
| Zeb Cullen chapter 4 . 3/7/2012
Well, your style of writing is just a LITTLE bit stronger than Stephenie's and I enjoy it, since obviously Edward's feelings are more intense than Isabella's. I can really SEE it in front of my eyes when you write it. You have got an AMAZING talent for storytelling. Do continue writing! Your style of writing really captivates the reader, even though it is a little slap-dash. Keep writing! You always have my encouragement.
| Zeb Cullen chapter 2 . 3/7/2012
Ummmmm...couldn't Edward just have picked the right answer out of his head? loved it anyway! Thanks!
| TwilightFanInIllinois chapter 14 . 3/6/2012
This is such an amazing story. Your writing is excellent! I wish you'd finish the book! :D
| Gs chapter 6 . 2/9/2012