|Reviews for It's Just a Wedding|
| Labyrinth01 chapter 10 . 3/20/2009
Hi, I hate to ever say anything negative when reviewing stories, because I write fanfic too and I know how hard it is. But I am a huge fan of both The Closer and Bones, and I honestly couldn't follow this story at all. It is rambling and disjointed, and you also have a lot of typos in it. Perhaps you should have someone read the story and see if it makes sense to them before publishing it. Good luck.
| Canon and Grammar Queen chapter 3 . 2/9/2009
You have too much going on here, and you don't develop any of it. Crossovers are difficult, especially when they are just thrown together like this. I honestly had to give up after this third chapter. I can't follow a thing that's going on, and I really don't care to.
You can't italicize all of the text and expect someone to read it. Italics are for emphasis, such as with a word from a foriegn language, a title of a book, or a word spoken with a particular inflection.
You also MUST start a new paragraph every time someone speaks. That may be one of the many reasons I can't continue reading this. It's impossible to follow the storyline because it's impossible to tell which characters are speaking.