|Reviews for The First Night|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
i luv it!
| blood666 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
it is really good keep up the good work
| Sunandini chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
pls update! im waitin for more.. its an awesome beginning!
| CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| ana chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Hey! Im reviewing to collect my cookie!
anyways i saw that its been like three years and you havent updated. whats up with that? welp its a funn story and i would like it if you updated? please? :)
| hollyhalebforeverlove chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
I love it! Update please!
| Treacherous Darkness chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
| KatieAnn101495 chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
I like this one a lot! Are you going to continue it? I think that you should.:)
| Rosalie Hale Cullen chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
i like it continue!
| Jazzy33 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
I really do like your story. I think that in the book they don't mention Rosalie enough. THis really depicts their relationship. The twilight saga is my favorite books in the world and I happily support anyone who likes them too. YOu should continue to make twilight stories with your own creative twists. I hope that you would like my twilight story also it's called A little time to spare.
| iheartdrummers chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Wow. I really like this story so far.
| MRS.waitforit.STARK chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
You have to continue! I'm in love with this story! :) please!
| Kimblekn chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
That was SO good! I can't WAIT for another chapter!
| Uxiegirl chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
This is really good! I like it. I like how you changed Emmett from being a big jerk to just a funny guy. Good. Very good.
So...where's my cookie?
| Blonde K chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
i like this! it is a nice read and it made me laugh, good job!