Reviews for The Out of Towners
vanishingp2000 chapter 12 . 9/23/2008
I have thoroughly enjoyed this from beginning to end and hope that you have more NCIS stories in the works. Many thanks, VP.
vkb416 chapter 12 . 9/23/2008
Thanks for another great story and for regular updates. The bit with Tony working McGee to recover pictures from the cell phone is just one example of what I enjoy so much about your writing style. Naturally Tony would be more focused on Tim recovering photos of hot nurses from the cell phone than on Tim's actual recovery and Tim would allow his love of all things tech to cause him to ignore his own pain (and Gibb's wrath) to indulge his inner computer geek. Not only does the scene nicely illustrate the dynamic between the two agents but it neatly sets up the plot twist with the unexpected photo. It's one thing to have an idea for a story but it's this kind of attention to the smaller details that makes for a great read. Look forward to more from you in the future!
TheNaggingCube chapter 12 . 9/23/2008
This story was marvelous. Intense and intrigue. Voices ringing true. Truly evil scary bad guy.

Tony whumping ... what more can a girl ask for :-D
M E Wofford chapter 12 . 9/23/2008
GOOD story!

I am glad they got the bad guy!

Enjoyed it!
archiev chapter 12 . 9/23/2008
Thanks for a very good story.
Lillz chapter 12 . 9/23/2008
totally brilliant read! huge thanks for the laughs and suspense and plot twists and the fast paced finale.

great stuff!
precious pup chapter 12 . 9/23/2008
Excellent story. Loved all the double crossing. So this was set late Season Three? Ziva is there but McGee hasn't got his porsche yet? That Director and her seminars! Loved all the action and the team interacting and caring and worrying about each other...and trying to not care becuase they will all be fine...right?. Abby is spot on as well. Thanks sad to see it end. I write character stuff but love to read something with a plot which you have in spades so well done. Oh loved your other one with the suits as well. Both had some nice humor in it as well to balance everything and nice pacing keeping everything moving.
MissJayne chapter 12 . 9/23/2008
Loved the whole thing! Lots of nice twists at the hospital. And I love the ending! Excellent story!
Serialgal chapter 10 . 9/22/2008
Whew! They found McGee - thank goodness!
archiev chapter 11 . 9/21/2008
Thanks for the update.
booklover chapter 11 . 9/21/2008
oh dear. That's not good.
MissJayne chapter 11 . 9/21/2008
Loved it! Only Tony would annoy the nurses so much, and only Ziva and Gibbs would ditch the bodyguards as soon as possible. Excellent chapter!
Belker chapter 11 . 9/21/2008
Holy crap! Didn't see that one coming!

I love the way Tony always manages to 'convince' McGee to do things he really doesn't want to.

Love! Belker
M E Wofford chapter 11 . 9/21/2008

The big bad is part of NCIS?


Exciting. Can't wait for more.

Good chapter.

Good Tony and McGee interaction.
precious pup chapter 10 . 9/19/2008
Ha beat that as he slips into unconciousness. Great story. Gibbs protecting him through the fire fight.
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