Reviews for It's Very Obvious
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2018
so funny
3DPhantom chapter 1 . 1/5/2017
"Air go"... Was that a typo? I assume you meant the Latin term "ergo".

Cute story. X3
YokaiAngel chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
Wow!~~
crimgate chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
hahahah amazing xD
MnC21 chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Haha. Poor Kaito.

Funny story anyway.
Ocean Starfly chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
LOL That was awesome! The humor wasn't perfect, but humor is pretty hard unless you're a natural comedian. They are an awesome quartet of three detectives and a thief. Isn't that like walking into a lion's den for Kaito? Then again, he is Kaito... XD Anyway, keep up the great writing!
nequam-tenshi chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
haha! a nice one-shot!
softdreamer chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
good story

although I didn't really liked the dating part (but it's just at this moment)
Aslook chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Yay! Update soon please!
Saitaina R. Moricia chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
Well, the story started out intresting, and then just kind of went...no where.

As for technical details, you really need someone to read over this before you post it so they can catch some of the structure problems, such as too many exclamation points and odd sentance readings.

Also, NEVER put an author's not in a story. Never. Not only is it the sign of a weak author, it distracts the reader and pulls them out of the story. Instead, try your best to find a way to portray what you need within the story.
yolapeoples chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
That was funny and Kaito is awesome.

~ Y
Solera chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
Me: Yes Heiji and Hakuba I'm reviewing ok?

you've used Booker instead of Yusaku... since you used japanese names for the others, I think you should change Booker to Yusaku

Kaitou means phantom thief. Kaito Kuroba is his real name not Kaitou Kuroba.

I like the last part XD

sisters o.O
CrashMartini chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Yoshimi- ~Sisters! Sisters! There were never such devoted sisters!~

Yoshimichi- Oh gawd, stop singing!

-Yoshimi Kurosaki

Yoshimichi Kurosaki
Kumikodes chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
I'll just ask.

What are they thinking?