Reviews for Break
The Forbidden Truth chapter 2 . 12/23/2010
Woo! Finally, Bella grew herself a backbone and she doesn't sound whiny brat. Wish there was more but it's great the way it is too. :)
LeighAnn Brewer chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
So sad!
Yasona Black chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Will you look at that? I didn't want to bang my head against the wall while reading the summary or the story. Props for writing a decent Twilight fic!

I do think you could draw it out more and give some more attention to the different POVs. If you did that, I believe you could write a good Edward leaves Bella after NM story. Of course, you could leave it as this and it would still be pretty good.

Happy writing!
kdscutie chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
oh my god!

that was so awesome!

it did make sense!

wow!

i loved it!