Reviews for Fireworks Fiasco
Guest chapter 6 . 3/8/2013
what a great story loved reading it! made me laugh!
Dixie Dewdrop chapter 6 . 1/8/2011
I think Tim and Abby will think twice before anything like that happens again.
Fiction Ghost Writer chapter 6 . 2/20/2010
I thought it would have been Tony getting in that trouble with Abby! Good to share the wealth, LOL!
wandamarie chapter 6 . 1/21/2009
it was a good story thank you
raspberryred chapter 6 . 9/10/2008
Stop whatever you do as a day job, and just write, ok? LOL Loved the interaction between Abby and McGee. (Could stand to see McGee receiving some more of Gibbs 'attention'.)

Great story, a pleasure to read!
hawngirl chapter 6 . 9/10/2008
great story. lol. "cuddly grandfather" very funny. thanks again
sasha1600 chapter 6 . 9/10/2008
I loved Tim's insecurity, and his confusion about Gibbs being 'nice' about punishing him. I can see Abby's prediction about the next hard decision coming true. And the Director's hints at the end were a really nice touch. I can't wait to see where your Muse takes us next!
ellameno chapter 6 . 9/10/2008
hm... INTERESTING! Yet another awesome way to end a perfect story!

As Always,

S'Dot Yam
AislingK chapter 6 . 9/10/2008
Nicely tied up, even if Abby is just a little bit smug here!
crazy4gibbs chapter 6 . 9/10/2008
Beautiful ending and last chapter. It's nice to see how the two of them accepted the consequences. Thanks for the story!
aserene chapter 6 . 9/10/2008
I loved it! Excellent work! I'm glad Jen wasn't fooled too!
Balou chapter 5 . 9/10/2008
Great, please update soon. I can't wait to see "timmy-boy" clean the lab with his toothbrush (or something horrible like that)
Cake-Otaku chapter 5 . 9/9/2008
ow poor abby!

i feel some pity with her!

keep writing you know that i love your stories!
hawngirl chapter 5 . 9/8/2008
great chapter. feel sorry for abby. please update soon
aserene chapter 5 . 9/8/2008
Ouch...poor Abby. But she should know better. They both should.

Excellent work!
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