Reviews for Naruto: Captured
natsuphoenix chapter 10 . 6/29
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Guest chapter 3 . 6/16
lol hiruzen you insane little shit
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16
this is pretty good
Butterflygrin chapter 21 . 6/5
seriously? that's your uptake on deidara's entry? it's somehow so short and funny and I don't even know why
Butterflygrin chapter 18 . 6/5
hmm. ur sakura improvement is really lacking, It's like you dismiss her chakra control. not that her taijutsu improvement bad. still, It's not like sakura if there's no chakra control included
Butterflygrin chapter 18 . 6/5
hmm. sakura's improvement is abit lacking. with her chakra control, she can avtually do a lot of things and be creative with it. not that her taijutsu is bad. but yeah
Reisbig2009 chapter 22 . 5/31
I like that you had Asuma giving Naruto advice about having a Hokage for a dad. Great idea!
Guest chapter 25 . 5/13
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Guest chapter 25 . 3/19
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KPfan83 chapter 25 . 3/14
realing loving this story and for once i actually like the narutoXsakura interactions but WHY! oh WHY! is it just as stories really get going they just abruptly stop
Bloodzone15 chapter 1 . 1/10
Lying to the Hokage and putting it in writing are the two worst thing, I'd hate to see what the third worst thing is?
kurotenshi-08 chapter 25 . 12/11/2016
Incredible story
salasdaniel74 chapter 19 . 11/12/2016
I going to do a little rant here, of all the times I read that they dodge naruto questions/curiosity which is sad as they run away in a sense and force naruto to tell instead. The reason they think that naruto would do all that they think he will do is bull. He is an orphan who want to kbow about his parents and that is strongly dislike by everyone and doing all that he can to be sane as no one is taking him in a serious maner and he won't take them seriously (i. academy). When he does take things seriously he is not believed and call him a demon saying lies or an idiot saying stuff. I once read that he was told to stop being a fool about promising to bring back sasuke (unrelated but the intention is there) in a serious tone that thrown off naruto that they would be like this (i.e. angry/furiously/unexpected behavior).

Other than me thinking personally, as a reader view point you are doing good.

P.S. I know im missing something, but meh... you could at least dodge it with paying for ramen than going to puberty route (joking is fine). Sorry for the rant as it was too much to endure reading this part.
Dragonjek chapter 25 . 11/5/2016
I've enjoyed reading this story. Great job!
Dragonjek chapter 5 . 11/5/2016
I see an issue in first describing elite ninja as the most powerful in the village, then saying that the standard ninja would win in a fight.
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