Reviews for Apologies
StarWarsSkyrim51 chapter 1 . 1/13
I liked it.
etfantasy chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
Great idea!
Kyndsie chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Marvelous! LOVE the image of the two of them playing as children!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I really like this. I definitely think that you should turn it into a mini-series.
pima chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Loved the idea of them as children, especially with only hoggle to vaguely supervise them
UndergroundDaydreams chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
That was cute. I like the idea of a young Jareth and Sarah as playmates. And Sarah is rather good at making friends. I do wonder about the backstory and all that and how it fits with the Labyrinth, but I'll just assume this is AU. I think my favorite bit was the staring contest with the eye lichen. :) Thanks for writing and sharing!
Jeni27 chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
This story is adorably cute. I love it!

I have been inspired by this and a picture called 'Of girls and Goblin Kings by imaginarium on Deviantart.

I can't wait to finish writing it. It's a lot of fun to write 'Little Sarah'.


archiveduser1836251 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
That was adorable. And evil. But mostly adorable. I can't get over this image of little Sarah and Jareth running around the Labyrinth wreaking havoc. A refreshingly different but wonderfully in-character fic. It's nice to take a break from all the Sexual Tension! once in a while. XD

autumnangelwrites chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
That was so adorable! I love it :D

A small Jareth is just too cute for words! This story was quite amazing and creative. I loved it and I thought that you portrayed both Sarah and Jareth wonderfully. Why was Sarah in the Labyrinth, though?
katdemon1895 chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
absolutely ADORABLE! mini sarah and mini jareth are just so cute and this is totally within character for them, i can so see sarah making friends with fairies and sending them against jareth and jareth's speech about being right becuase he's the goblin prince was just so perfect

any chance of there being a playdate in sarah's world? or maybe just some interaction between sarah's parents and jareth's parents- going on about how perfect their kids are for each other while one of the kids tackles the other and tries to grind dirt into the hair of the tackled or maybe sarah having a bad day at kindergarden or in preschool and gets bullied and jareth intervenes in some strange way

fantastic job with this
kitsucaramy chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
OMG this was so friggin CUTE! Oh oh please do make this a mini series
Dark Angel Princess 13 chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Yes, you really should do a series off this it would be fantastic!
LabyGal chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
ooh so cute!

aw sarah is a wicked little demon, i love that other side of her!
Celecia Leigh chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
Great work. Make it a series. It's really funny.
Cascaper chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
Universal "Aww!" magnet. It's so sweet, this ficlet. I adoresh it.

Typos or no.

"...stalked off, intent on find as many peach stones as possible." -on 'finding' as many peach stones (etc.)

"'Stupid bloody plant,' Hoggle muttered to his himself for umpteenth time that day..." -Delete 'his' and add 'the', as in "to himself for the umpteenth time". Did I tell you I love that section? Yay eye moss _

"...he hurried continued when he saw Hoggle about to say something." -'hurriedly' continued.

"I’ll go and look her I promise." -look 'for' her that is, your miniature Highness.

"The bottom lip was out and boy refused to meet Hoggle’s eyes." -'His' bottom lip; 'the' boy refused (etc.)

Sarah's new friends, both kids being stubborn and pouty, Hoggle getting pelted with peach pits...This just made me smile from start to finish. Excellent work. I give this a fave.
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