Reviews for A Tale of Two Worlds
AnonTheMouse chapter 11 . 11/4/2011
This story has gotten quite good. Really loving the way you've made two dissimilar universes (two of my favourite games) work together. I really hope that you plan to finish it, because I'm looking forward to reading what happens next...though you still need to find a better way to change scenes than just abruptly switching perspectives. Even a row of *'s would be a huge improvement. The Gilder/Ciboulette potential romance angle really made me grin. There's a lot of interesting questions I hope will be answered in future "What happens if someone from Vanilla's world gets a moonberry?" and "What would the Globe Trotters do if they got to Arcadia?". Looking forward to finding the answers.
AnonTheMouse chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
TRANSITIONS! This fanfic needs some! The scene switches so fast it gave me whiplash...ow!
CaliTues chapter 11 . 6/10/2009
Ack, Still confused about SOA. But I'll be sure to look into it more. Anyway, looking forward to an update if you plan on continuing this )
CaliTues chapter 4 . 6/10/2009
I was just going to review at the end but, eh, what the heck? Honestly, I don't have the slightest clue about Skies of Arcadia, which is why I'm using wikipedia as I read. But this is one of two? maybe Bumpy Trot fics so... D I'm reading this! Anyway...Great fic so far :D
Krile chapter 11 . 4/17/2009
Hmm, interesting idea! I don't think anyone's written a Steambot Chronicles story yet, and merging it with Skies of Arcadia... I didn't think it would work, but I like how things are going so far. I just hope ALL the characters will meet at some point; though not now.

Just a shout-out to let you know there are people who know what Steambot Chronicles is, and there ARE readers. :)
Emana chapter 1 . 1/7/2009



...I have no idea what Steambot Chronicles is...:D...


...Mind educating me? Your story has my interest and I'd hate to miss out on something just because I don't understand the story. I looked it up, but I think you'd be better at explaining the game than the Internet. You've got great sentence structure. How about a few more details? I'd like to hear your descriptions of people like Willy and the others. They're main characters right? You should describe what they look like.