Reviews for Love, Lies and Betrayal
Stanzasam chapter 30 . 12/26/2008
I really love the happy ending.

Good idea to make Vicky immortal with the serum and without turning her into a vampire.

Its a wonderful story and I cant wait to read the sequel!
Stanzasam chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
This was lovely. I really liked the way you have captured the range of emotions in Vicky that led her to look out for Henry and to go to his former home.

Especially well written was her sense of nervousness and fear about what she was feeling.
Megan Consoer chapter 30 . 10/26/2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
aeferch chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Loved it!
Hazza1508 chapter 30 . 10/7/2008
loved it and repeat LOVED it lol. Such a good story so cute and so happy ending if you wanted you could do a sequel i know i would love one so ill wait and see but this story was awesome
Inthannon chapter 30 . 10/5/2008
Good job! Some parts were a little bit confusing and the flow of the story could have been better in a few places, but it was very enjoyable! Did you have a sequel in mind? :D
Evilvalentine chapter 30 . 10/1/2008
Loved it! Great as usual :) Would love to read a sequel!
little dragon85 chapter 30 . 10/1/2008
i loved how you made vicki deal with the trust issues i would love to see a sequal to this what happens? how things progress? did the serum work?
toesinthesand79 chapter 30 . 9/30/2008
AWESOME STORY! Definitely need sequel.
remeyqueen74 chapter 30 . 9/30/2008
oh my god yes i need a squeal i need to know if it worked if shes get a couple of little Henry's and all that good stuff
toesinthesand79 chapter 29 . 9/30/2008
Very hot! Loved it!
greenfire249 chapter 27 . 9/28/2008
good story
toesinthesand79 chapter 27 . 9/27/2008
Eep! I can't wait to read more! I'm hooked. :)
remeyqueen74 chapter 26 . 9/26/2008
wow i knew was quite amazing as a person but he just topped himself
toesinthesand79 chapter 25 . 9/25/2008
Totally in tears over this chapter. Beautifully written!
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